This story is going well for me. The problem here, and in most stories that developers create, is the reader's ENORMOUS anxiety. In this one, I followed the launch and stayed away for several cycles, and I do this with stories that I see potential in. This one has potential, and in this last one, the developer has at least three possible paths. As much as they deny it and want the girl to develop resistance and charm, in the end we want her to be, THE SLUT, the WHORE, and thirsty to CHEAT and SLEEP a lot!
To the developer, stick to your writing and script, if you have one, of course. It won't please everyone, as always happens in all stories, but so what!
So far it's good. I'm waiting for a few more cycles to read and see where things go.