- Feb 5, 2021
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Very true.A critique I would have in regards to the MC's behavior in that scenario would be that it conflicts with the character if his confidence is really high, which has correlation to the attributes the first guy was complaining about, though it's true you can have those with low confidence. If the character does supposedly have high confidence and/or dominance, he likely wouldn't be as self-deprecating. That wouldn't mean he wouldn't be critical of himself, though his critiques would be why isn't he living up to his own expectations of himself, or his mindset.
The issue I imagine is it'd be more work to alter dialogue to account for such things, though it would add to the immersion.
Maybe with high confidence I should have him reassure himself in the car mirror. Everyone gets low but it's how we deal with it.
Thank you. I will do an edit