VN Ren'Py Completed The Entrepreneur [Complete Edition] [MisterMaya]

[MisterMaya]

Paywall for the Christmas Special? Really? Thought it would be a good way to check out the Devs skills with writing, renders and animations, to see if I might invest in the full game. That's a nope. Also this game really needs an Ipatch, not this step-cest nonsense.

I'm sorry you feel this way, eventually this Christmas special will become free, as will every updates from the main game, but in its early days, it's available to patrons only

 

[MisterMaya]

I like the game so far but the random space before punctuation is really throwing me off.

"MC you came !" should be "MC you came!"

I know its super small and pedantic but whoa man, does it throw me off.

Like the game and characters so far though, gorgeous renders!

As for Harem vs single route, I look at it like this:
Harem will always beat single route for me because I get attached to characters (so long as they are well written) and forcing me to choose 1 and abandon all the others is like torture. If you want to allow people to reject everyone but 1, totally fine, do that to satisfy the single route players, but don't make that the only option because otherwise people like me, who like all your characters, will more then likely just not play the game if forced to choose.

Most people would say: "Well that's why you play multiple times!"
To that I say: Are you going to give me more hours in the day?
Most of us have full time jobs, wives/children, and other hobbies. Time for games is limited and there are ALWAYS new games coming out / old games getting updated every day on the latest updates page. Sure, I could replay your game....4-5 times for all the routes, oooor play the next update of one of my favorites, or this completely new story from this promising new game that doesn't get me hooked by the characters that doesn't make me choose only 1...

So yes, harem games or more precisely, games with a harem route will ALWAYS get my preference for playing. I wont hate on those who like single routes, just don't make that the only option and guess what, we both get to be happy!

Thank you for your comment, everyone's been telling me this so I fixed it for v0.3.

As for your concern about single route vs Harem, I totally get it.
But the game was made with the objectif of ending up with one girl only

Still, you made your point, and I understand how you feel.

It's something I will have to consider for my next game, but I'm a long way from that lol !

I'm still glad you liked the game so far

 

[MisterMaya]

Okay, the little injokes in the game have me rolling. Like when Val shows MC her facegram and the photo comments are just F95 user comments and the Dev saying he's proud of his favorite girl xDDD

I'm glad someone picked that up xD

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

I like the game so far but the random space before punctuation is really throwing me off.

"MC you came !" should be "MC you came!"

I know its super small and pedantic but whoa man, does it throw me off.

Like the game and characters so far though, gorgeous renders!

As for Harem vs single route, I look at it like this:
Harem will always beat single route for me because I get attached to characters (so long as they are well written) and forcing me to choose 1 and abandon all the others is like torture. If you want to allow people to reject everyone but 1, totally fine, do that to satisfy the single route players, but don't make that the only option because otherwise people like me, who like all your characters, will more then likely just not play the game if forced to choose.

Most people would say: "Well that's why you play multiple times!"
To that I say: Are you going to give me more hours in the day?
Most of us have full time jobs, wives/children, and other hobbies. Time for games is limited and there are ALWAYS new games coming out / old games getting updated every day on the latest updates page. Sure, I could replay your game....4-5 times for all the routes, oooor play the next update of one of my favorites, or this completely new story from this promising new game that doesn't get me hooked by the characters that doesn't make me choose only 1...

So yes, harem games or more precisely, games with a harem route will ALWAYS get my preference for playing. I wont hate on those who like single routes, just don't make that the only option and guess what, we both get to be happy!

well I mean I don't see it as rejecting/abandoning the other girls you can still form friendships with them if you're not on their route

as for me I never feel guilty about rejecting any girl

I'd rather reject them so that they could move on and find somebody who can treat them like they're one and only

instead of a guy who treats them like

this is girlfriend number 4

I cannot go to a girl tell her I love her then

turn around and say the same thing to another girl I don't even like three ways cuz I don't like

anybody else touching the woman I love

but with all that being said I don't mind if you want to put Harem in the next game

as long as it is optional

 

[The ArcKnight]

well I mean I don't see it as rejecting/abandoning the other girls you can still form friendships with them if you're not on their route

as for me I never feel guilty about rejecting any girl

I'd rather reject them so that they could move on and find somebody who can treat them like they're one and only

instead of a guy who treats them like

this is girlfriend number 4

I cannot go to a girl tell her I love her then

turn around and say the same thing to another girl I don't even like three ways cuz I don't like

anybody else touching the woman I love

but with all that being said I don't mind if you want to put Harem in the next game

as long as it is optional

That is a matter of perspective and personal preference Sir.
I know plenty of people who have multiple spouses and love each as much as the other. There is nothing wrong with having multiple partners or having a single partner, each has its place.

When it comes to a game though, I like having the options. Including a harem route doesn't take away from those who want a single route. You can enjoy it your way, I can enjoy it mine. At least that is my perspective. I don't want to yuk anyone else's yum.... except NTR. FUCK NTR! xD

Thank you for your comment, everyone's been telling me this so I fixed it for v0.3.

As for your concern about single route vs Harem, I totally get it.
But the game was made with the objectif of ending up with one girl only

Still, you made your point, and I understand how you feel.

It's something I will have to consider for my next game, but I'm a long way from that lol !

I'm still glad you liked the game so far

Ah, its single route only? Then I will probably dip out and pick up with you on your next game then if/when you decide to include an (optional) harem route. Good luck with your game, you make amazing and hilarious art!

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

That is a matter of perspective and personal preference Sir.
I know plenty of people who have multiple spouses and love each as much as the other. There is nothing wrong with having multiple partners or having a single partner, each has its place.

When it comes to a game though, I like having the options. Including a harem route doesn't take away from those who want a single route. You can enjoy it your way, I can enjoy it mine. At least that is my perspective. I don't want to yuk anyone else's yum.... except NTR. FUCK NTR! xD




Ah, its single route only? Then I will probably dip out and pick up with you on your next game then if/when you decide to include an (optional) harem route. Good luck with your game, you make amazing and hilarious art!

I'm glad people can enjoy something I can't but being with multiple girls that's not me


I love I absolutely love the intimacy and special feeling you get from a monogamous relationship there is nothing like it

and I've said this a million times

all perverts are brothers and sisters so don't ever call me sir it's bra or brother or vidal

 

[AlxTR]

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Updated: 29.12.2021
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[Havik79]

Uh, what did the ginger have to be a shallow bimbo?.

I normally do not care, but I am curious, we are what about 22, Alexa 20, Valentina 26, Laura 30?.

KnightoftheWhiteSun Thank you very much dude, I just started, I was going fucking mental, I thought with the space (and needing glasses) it was I all the time, not !

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

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happy New Year to all my brothers and sisters I love you all

 

[MisterMaya]

Uh, what did the ginger have to be a shallow bimbo?.

I normally do not care, but I am curious, we are what about 22, Alexa 20, Valentina 26, Laura 30?.

KnightoftheWhiteSun Thank you very much dude, I just started, I was going fucking mental, I thought with the space (and needing glasses) it was I all the time, not !

So, MC is 22, Alexa is 19, Valentine is 23, Laura is 30

 

[Havik79]

I see, well thanks for the info.

Not bad, graphics are good, quality is decent, Engrish is a bit hard, the story is unique and interesting, not sure about how much drama there is, as if the women's baggage wasn't enough, now some tool wanting to take the bar from us, was surprised with how much story there is, although I mean main game, not played the Xmas, confused about Luara, she goes on about us being so mature for our young age, then like a 20-year-old bimbo takes is lingerie shopping, and lets us see her outfits seemed out of place.

Glad I use save a lot, WT mod worked fine, but the replay gallery is fucked, its crashes.

The overuse of the ! and spacing with them made me think they were I, which was annoying.

I think I would have enjoyed it more as a harem game, than a monogamy game, mostly because I just find most of the girls to be meh, they are all ok mostly, but no one stands out, massively disappointed the ginger is not only a shallow bimbo, but she is a bait and switch, false advertising fake ginger.

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[Vidal the king of Pervert]

So, MC is 22, Alexa is 19, Valentine is 23, Laura is 30

I knew it Laura has a lot of child-bearing years left and I plan to put them to good use

 

[cate.archer]

knew it Laura has a lot of child-bearing years left and I plan to put them to good use

..... if i'm not faster

 

[Larry2000]

I'm currently looking into this, i will try to make an incest patch for this game.
Btw i had to pay rent at home when i started working, i believe it's normal to pay for your upkeep when you still live at home.

At first glance it's going to be mom -> her daughters -> sisters
to mc it will be -> his aunt and cousins

If i'm going to make this work it will be an estranged family, probably on the mothers side because she died at shildbirth.

edit: Or i can take the easy way and just make Lucy a cousin

Don't give up on your dreams. You can do it! <3 <3 <3 <3

 

[Drainer002]

Don't give up on your dreams. You can do it! <3 <3 <3 <3

hehe, already did for the 0.2 game

 

[fuckmymamarunnin]

I know, that's why when developer's are intend on staying on patreon that it's mostly fan-based patches so that patreon can't blame the dev team, the other workaround is that if a dev does it themslefs they upload it on other platforms like itch.io and subscribestar, no idea why patreon stay's this popular though (no incest, no beastiality, no lolli, most hardcore stuff banned...).

+1 AMEN!! MORE to all of that i say, MORE!!

 

[Warzoo]

Hello,
Really good game so far.
I like the slow pace and the fact that girls won't be so easy to get. Female characters are beautiful and have "humans proportions", that's great. Nice renders. Interesting story.
Just MC's hair that kill the mood, but it's not that bad.
Congratulations to the dev.

 

[MisterMaya]

Hello,
Really good game so far.
I like the slow pace and the fact that girls won't be so easy to get. Female characters are beautiful and have "humans proportions", that's great. Nice renders. Interesting story.
Just MC's hair that kill the mood, but it's not that bad.
Congratulations to the dev.

Hey, thanks a lot for your comment
Maybe he'll have to go to Laura's salon at some point then

Hope you'll like what I have planned for the episode.

MisterMaya

 

[ZEHAHAHAH395]

Wibble recommended this game to us on discord, and he was right! the game's fun, nice atmosphere and its one of those visual novels that strayed from just being fapping material to being a fun game too. Though the direction of the scenes of needs improvement like that one where lucy kisses the mc. The animation felt like it came out of nowhere but nevertheless, great game! wishing you good luck on the games development. Was actually relieved that this was just not some bland porn game but a fun visual novel : )

 

[MisterMaya]

Wibble recommended this game to us on discord, and he was right! the game's fun, nice atmosphere and its one of those visual novels that strayed from just being fapping material to being a fun game too. Though the direction of the scenes of needs improvement like that one where lucy kisses the mc. The animation felt like it came out of nowhere but nevertheless, great game! wishing you good luck on the games development. Was actually relieved that this was just not some bland porn game but a fun visual novel : )

Wibble's the man ! He's been a great help, and I'm glad you discovered my game thanks to him.
I'm happy to know that you've enjoyed it, and I hope to see you for the next episode of the game