MisterMaya, Hi again, I just recently found out about the new episode and here I am trying it out.
I love the way Valentine path is made, she's already my headcanon girl. I was in a relationship with a traumatized girl with an asshole ex, only he never found the strength to apologize, but what I wanted to say is that it's done pretty believably from my experience.
I also liked in this episode that one of the love triangles doesn't drag on for too long and we are put to the choice of eliminating one of the contenders. Plus the main character is such a harem protagonist who realizes the girls like him, which is also a plus.
Overall despite the early stage of development you've already quickly grabbed the gists of similar novellas and the game already has a well crafted plot and characters that evoke affection and make you care. I wish you good luck and hope that the future work goes in the same spirit!