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Call of Booty

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Mar 21, 2020
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Surprisingly good experience! Girls are great,even MC looks quite good,but what I like the most is main story and sub stories. Not often we got great character's own stories that good to balance whole game enjoyment overall.Esecially seeing that one sub story (Paige-Laura) is mixing with main story and I have gut feeling that others will do the same. Why it has milf tag? Future updates perhaps? Anyway,can't wait for next update,hoping that will be good as up to now. Great work Frenchman! Chapeau! ;)
 

Qmil679

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Ahahah I understand how you feel about Valentine.

I don't know if you've reached the end of the game so you might not want to read that :
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Anyway, thanks for your comment I'm glad you like the others :)
Yeah, I'm starting to notice it. :)
And I think I am taking back what I wrote about her... I'm starting to like her. She is good when she open up to MC.

Yes, I was pissed off by her behavior at first, the way she treated and spoke to the MC. Especially when she chased the MC out of the house/room to record a video for her fans.


BTW.. Elena is a bitch.:LOL:
I didn't accept her advances to MC because I didn't want to spoil my relationship with lovely Alexa.

I don't like easy women. Which jumps on the MC as soon as they see him, and don't even know him well.

I don't want an easy woman who sleeps with a lot of men, I prefer to get the one woman and get to know her well.
 

Hildegardt

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Ahahah I understand how you feel about Valentine.

I don't know if you've reached the end of the game so you might not want to read that :
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Anyway, thanks for your comment I'm glad you like the others :)
Honestly, I didn't even notice that Valentine was supposed to be annoying, until the MC just outright said so. To me they were just bantering, just like the MC banters with Lucy aswell.
I guess there's a fine line between highlighting a characters issues and turning readers off of the character completely, but I think that, as long as there's a resolution to the conflict, people will warm up to the character eventually. It's just that there'll always be people, who complain every time a game makes them feel anything but arousal.

Anyway, it's just that I feel like Valentines rudeness could've been a little more obvious for my taste. It's not an easy thing to sell for an erotic VN, but so is depression (which I hope won't just be cured by the MC's dick).
 

MisterMaya

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Apr 25, 2021
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Surprisingly good experience! Girls are great,even MC looks quite good,but what I like the most is main story and sub stories. Not often we got great character's own stories that good to balance whole game enjoyment overall.Esecially seeing that one sub story (Paige-Laura) is mixing with main story and I have gut feeling that others will do the same. Why it has milf tag? Future updates perhaps? Anyway,can't wait for next update,hoping that will be good as up to now. Great work Frenchman! Chapeau! ;)
Hey thanks a lot for your review !
I'm glad you liked the story as well as the sub stories, my goal is really get you attached to the game thrilled, and curious !

Merci !
 
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MisterMaya

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Yeah, I'm starting to notice it. :)
And I think I am taking back what I wrote about her... I'm starting to like her. She is good when she open up to MC.

Yes, I was pissed off by her behavior at first, the way she treated and spoke to the MC. Especially when she chased the MC out of the house/room to record a video for her fans.


BTW.. Elena is a bitch.:LOL:
I didn't accept her advances to MC because I didn't want to spoil my relationship with lovely Alexa.

I don't like easy women. Which jumps on the MC as soon as they see him, and don't even know him well.

I don't want an easy woman who sleeps with a lot of men, I prefer to get the one woman and get to know her well.
I feel that !
 

MisterMaya

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Apr 25, 2021
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Honestly, I didn't even notice that Valentine was supposed to be annoying, until the MC just outright said so. To me they were just bantering, just like the MC banters with Lucy aswell.
I guess there's a fine line between highlighting a characters issues and turning readers off of the character completely, but I think that, as long as there's a resolution to the conflict, people will warm up to the character eventually. It's just that there'll always be people, who complain every time a game makes them feel anything but arousal.

Anyway, it's just that I feel like Valentines rudeness could've been a little more obvious for my taste. It's not an easy thing to sell for an erotic VN, but so is depression (which I hope won't just be cured by the MC's dick).
Yes you're right it's not easy to sell it, and even less to make you feel it, but I hope it was convincing enough for you to wonder what's next !

Her depression will take quite some time to MC to cure it.
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Trasher2018

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I'm not sureI understood what plenk is though !
Its a german term.



Plenken is a German term for the insertion of inappropriate spaces before a mark.

Its counterpart is , the incorrect omission of a space after punctuation marks.

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Etymology[ ]
Plenken is derived as a borrowed word from the English blank. Its antonym klempen combines plenken and klemmen ("to clamp"), exchanging the K and P in such a way as to suggest both phonetically and orthographically its relationship and opposite meaning.

Both are internet coinages, dating from Johannes "Jödel" Leckebusch's introduction of plenken on in 1988 and now widely used on German newsgroups.

Usage[ ]
Plenken was once a common practice in Germany due to the standard German typing approximation of the traditional spacing rules, which use a variety of different-width spaces and which insert a or between words and most punctuation marks. With the introduction of the typewriter and its fixed-width space, English-language typists removed most spaces around punctuation marks, but some other languages' typists, including French and German, did not.

Simplistic computer tools typically mishandle plenken by treating them as ordinary , potentially inserting incorrect linebreaks and wrapping the punctuation mark onto the next line, rendering the text difficult to read. More sophisticated computer tools have French spacing modes which automatically change plenked spaces to special typographic spaces such as the espace fine insécable (non-breaking thin space). However, such spacing behaviour is not necessarily replicated for other languages and their typists must manually enter non-breaking spaces (option-space in any Macintosh application, but application-specific in other operating systems).

Plenken is increasingly discouraged among German-language typists.
:p

I see that you do that in your postings too, so maybe it is still common in french? You add spaces before your !/? but not before a . - and that is a bit strange for me tbh ^^
 
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Ahx

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Jul 9, 2021
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Another VN with a dead father ....hmm...OHH ....... MC didn't hate him, now that's original.
 
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cucubau111

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Jan 24, 2019
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Excellent game!

Top-notch renders, great characters in both looks and personality, level-headed MC, and interesting story. No to mention a lot of content for a 0,2 version.

I am looking forward to discovering more of the girs' stories, especially Laura's.

Keep up the good work, dev!
 
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Tor7

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Not sure if winning or losing is going to be the better option but click the spoiler tab for the answers :) :
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Why are you giving the answers away! Friends is a classic! I have all the seasons on DVD. I have watched it over and over so many times. It should be foundational to everyone's existence! If the heathens don't know the answers, they don't deserve the lewd scenes!
 
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Acrossa

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Realy looking forward to future updates! Very good start nice character development. Actually engaging story and great pace.
 
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Ahx

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Why are you giving the answers away! Friends is a classic! I have all the seasons on DVD. I have watched it over and over so many times. It should be foundational to everyone's existence! If the heathens don't know the answers, they don't deserve the lewd scenes!
you need to know friends to get the lewds ..?....That's hilarious.:LOL:
now i'm seriously doing my happy dance.
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4.10 star(s) 64 Votes