VN Ren'Py Completed The Entrepreneur [Complete Edition] [MisterMaya]

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

I've been honest since the demo dropped on august the 2nd, at some point you would have to make decisions which would bring you closer to one LIs at the expense of others
I'm glad everyone who played it enjoyed it, and to the others who want to drop it, thanks for trying it out anyway !
you can't please everyone, as long as my game makes sense to me and follows my story, that's all that matters IMO.

please bro do not pay attention to him that's why I love this game because you cannot be with every girl

and I love that your choices

Carry weight and has consequences for them just like you said you cannot please everyone in the game and in real life

 

[The Senior Perv]

I've been honest since the demo dropped on august the 2nd, at some point you would have to make decisions which would bring you closer to one LIs at the expense of others
I'm glad everyone who played it enjoyed it, and to the others who want to drop it, thanks for trying it out anyway !
you can't please everyone, as long as my game makes sense to me and follows my story, that's all that matters IMO.

That's right, it's your story and there's no way all fans are going to be pleased by your decisions. You could have postponed the choice for other episode and they would still have complained because "they love all the girls, they don't wanna feel bad", maybe it would have been worse because the attachment with them would have been bigger.

 

[dacris69]

what is with that disgusting dick in this game, looks like a zombie sausage

 

[Cedroc1701]

I think that, despite the setting (dude moves into a house with 3 unrelated women who quickly become emotionally attached to him and even somewhat reliant on him for their happiness) that the game doesn't present itself as a harem game since the relationships are somewhat grounded still, and the coming choices were obvious.

However, I am not sure I agree with the sentiment that the girls aren't "just there for the MC" because their stories are entirely dependent on him. Alexa NEEDED the MC to help her mature and gain confidence, Val NEEDED the MC to work through her depression issues, and Laura NEEDED the MC to help her move on with her life. Lucy is slightly less wrapped up, even though shes the long time bestie and a co-owner of the bar.

I'm sure part of it is just because we're in that awkward part of the story where the dominos are starting to fall, but I hope that "getting close to one LI at the expense of others" isn't literal, in that going on one LI path means that the others are left twisting. I know it's a cardinal sin among some to even suggest that a potential LI could find happiness elsewhere (even if they weren't chosen) but all of the women deserve some sort of happiness. If we're going down hard paths, then I hope there are "friend paths" for the others going forward (not that there can't be drama along the way of course) otherwise the choices are going to feel bitter.

 

[Cornfield]

Does episode 3 end where the MC is asked to name the cat ?
I can't move beyond that page.

 

[fishbrain]

I've been honest since the demo dropped on august the 2nd, at some point you would have to make decisions which would bring you closer to one LIs at the expense of others
I'm glad everyone who played it enjoyed it, and to the others who want to drop it, thanks for trying it out anyway !
you can't please everyone, as long as my game makes sense to me and follows my story, that's all that matters IMO.

So then lets say "hypothetically" lol that I only really have interest in Val and Laura, will there be an obvious point that branches off so you don't need two completely different playthroughs??

Also while I admit some of them due to timing were hilarious, what is up with all the blowfish faces?? lol

 

[dacris69]

Does episode 3 end where the MC is asked to name the cat ?
I can't move beyond that page.

i think that is from ep2

 

[Tincho_SI]

I got this error

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

So then lets say "hypothetically" lol that I only really have interest in Val and Laura, will there be an obvious point that branches off so you don't need two completely different playthroughs??

Also while I admit some of them due to timing were hilarious, what is up with all the blowfish faces?? lol

is an anime reference you won't get it unless you watch anime

it's basically the anime version of a pouty face

and don't worry every girl has a friendship route

 

[Crazonian1]

I'm usually not a fan of choices that force me to choose between LI's. But in this instance i was ok with it since my MC had no romantic interest in either Laura or Alexa. Laura is older and carries a ton of emotional baggage that she's always going to carry with her, to some extent, forever, while Alexa is an 18 yr old who still acts like a 15 yr old, and it's not a good match to put her with a twenty-something business owner. So i picked Laura in that choice, just so she wouldn't cry (i'm not heartless) and Alexa telling me later that we were just going to remain friends had me thinking "ok.... good.... i guess?" Since i had no interest in her in any other respect anyway.

Valentine is the clear winner here, my only concern is the lingering presence of her asshole ex. But seriously dude, you cheat mega on your gf and post her near nudes all over the internet and you expect to kiss and make up? huh.

Incidentally, Happiness Inn is a stupid name for a bar. I mean, an Inn, by definition, provides lodging, as well as the social setting.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

I'm usually not a fan of choices that force me to choose between LI's. But in this instance i was ok with it since my MC had no romantic interest in either Laura or Alexa. Laura is older and carries a ton of emotional baggage that she's always going to carry with her, to some extent, forever, while Alexa is an 18 yr old who still acts like a 15 yr old, and it's not a good match to put her with a twenty-something business owner. So i picked Laura in that choice, just so she wouldn't cry (i'm not heartless) and Alexa telling me later that we were just going to remain friends had me thinking "ok.... good.... i guess?" Since i had no interest in her in any other respect anyway.

Valentine is the clear winner here, my only concern is the lingering presence of her asshole ex. But seriously dude, you cheat mega on your gf and post her near nudes all over the internet and you expect to kiss and make up? huh.

Incidentally, Happiness Inn is a stupid name for a bar. I mean, an Inn, by definition, provides lodging, as well as the social setting.

you have insulted the woman I love prepare to die

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don't fuck with my baby mama tality

 

[qudwls02]

Another high quality work here. For a while I thought it's too slow burn romance and this MC act like kinda beta-male sissy who couldn't just has some fun and being too careful of everything, but there is ep3 finally some bold action.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Another high quality work here. For a while I thought it's too slow burn romance and this MC act like kinda beta-male sissy who couldn't just has some fun and being too careful of everything, but there is ep3 finally some bold action.

just because a guy doesn't like to sleep around is does not make him a beta-male sissy

look at me I'm a guy and I don't like to sleep around

 

[boobsrcool]

look at me

no

 

[artofwar]

MisterMaya uh, why does the incredibly white dude have a black dick? It's honestly pretty off putting.

 

[Doobiedoobiedoooo]

MisterMaya uh, why does the incredibly white dude have a black dick? It's honestly pretty off putting.

He's been culturally enriched.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I've noticed most of the women are very outspoken for their love of dick/past dicks can you tell me if Alexa is at least a virgin? Running out of li's.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

I love this game more and more each update. Another excellent chapter!! I was a bit skeptical at first as it started off like every other porn game,the MC moving in with a couple of hot chicks but it took a good turn. It's heavily story focused(always a big plus) and the choices has an impact on the game instead of the usual choices in these games that really means bugger all.

I never was a fan of harem games, because the approach and overall execution is usually too unrealistic and more often porn focused so I don't mind that this early on in the game there's already choices that can break and make your relationship with the Lis. Like the Alexa/Laura choice in ch 3 for example, though I do think Alexa's reaction was unnecessary, she could've at least hear the MC out

Another thing I love about this game is the fact that the characters have their own lives and their own emotions which aren't based around the MC like most AVNs.
Even minor characters are portrayed well. Like Laura's ex husband(R.I.P) and Val's ex, who I'm guessing bit the bullet towards the end of Ch3, but it's great that his character got redeemed before that. He fixed things with Val and genuinely wanted to change. which is something you honestly didn't have to do but it's great that you did.

Anyways I'm Seriously looking forward to the next chapters to come and I hope you continue with the great work you've been doing thus far MrMaya.

 

[Uzhirian]

MisterMaya Great update! Love your work.
Alexa hardcore shuts you down for missing her play, seemed a little over the top, but not entirely out of character. I'm team Lucy on my playthrough anyway, so soz Alexa lol. Still, its pretty hard to choice between them all, which is props to your character development.
I got a good chuckle from the little hidden message in the script too haha

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

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Sup bitch?

we meet again my arch-nemesis

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