Hi!
I'm glad you liked it specially if you were a bit hesitant at first. Thanks a lot for giving it a try despite your doubts.
While I'm tired of those kinds of plots, one of the first games I played (Depraved Awakening) has a prostitute love interest. And I loved that love interest. I think it's handled very well. It's impossible for me to feel comfortable with a plot like that nowadays, but simply because of my fondness for that game, I gave this short story a chance.
Just a detail about what you said. It's true that she caught him that one time and ended up masturbating in her room but, to be fair, he says he was totally obsessed with her for a long time. For him, this is much bigger than "I just want to fuck my sister".
Yes, I understood that part. The MC said that he had been obsessed with her for some time, that he thought those feelings would go away as time went on but they didn't. The "I just want to fuck my sister" thing didn't mean it for this game. I meant it in general asking what your next story would be like. To me that part is important. If a game focuses on just "fuck your family" or there really is a romantic story, since, being taboo, some games focus more on the lust part than the romantic part. Personally, I find the idea of the MC falling in love with his sister, mom, aunt, etc. even more appealing, taboo, wrong, etc. than just wanting to fuck them.
It's also true that this whole project started as a test. I wanted to see if I could go from a blank page to a finished game, so I wanted to keep it short. I also knew I wanted to go for my main fetish, which is obviously siblings, so I tried to come up with a somewhat believable initial premise that could lead to sex in just a few hours. Could I have done it differently? Sure, but at that moment it felt like the escort thing added a few layers of complexity to the character. Neither of them are in a place in their lives they're particularly enjoying and that could all change in one night where, apparently, everything goes wrong. Honestly, it felt interesting and truly different from other games. That's why I went with it.
I must say that I personally didn't notice Jen being very uncomfortable with her way of life. I did notice it on the MC's part, even inventing that he had a girlfriend and deciding to hire an escort to stop being a virgin. But, as I said, I didn't exactly notice Jen uncomfortable with her living situation. On the contrary. I know we are told that Jen has been working on that for a year. So it seemed to me that she was very used to that. I didn't feel that part that you mention. I think she comes across as much more relaxed than her brother. She's laughing, making jokes, etc. Maybe a little more nervousness or surprise in the way she acts would have been nice. Nothing over the top, but a little more noticeable. But, this is how I perceived it.
That said, the detail in which the MC hired the escort because she looked like Jen seemed like a nice touch to me. Kind of 'unbelievable', but it's another thing that shows how much he likes his sister.
Rearding the rest of your comment, that's actually what some of my other projects are heading towards. I've got many ideas. Some are weird, others are more focused on sexual comedy, but there's a specific script that's currently in development where the main premise is, literally, slowly falling in love with your slightly naive, yet totally adorable and strangely magnetic sister after a long period without seeing each other (and no, she's not a sexual worker of any kind).
Thanks again!
I'm glad to hear that. I'd definitely like to see a longer story and that it takes its time building up the romantic relationship with Jen.
