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What should be my next project?


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lordfridge9

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Let the developer do what they want. They'll take all the criticism and decide what actually applies and matters to them. Whether this is gonna be good or bad, depends only on them. Is the premise questionable? Sure, but only the dev can either make it or break it.

As for the anti TR and the anti-anti TR bitch squad, please fuck off into a thread solely dedicated for the purpose of eternal ideological fighting.
 
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delacroix2

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Interesting game, thanks

People don't have a problem with the LI being an escort; after all Carli from Depraved Awakening is one of the most popular love interests in the AVN comunity,heck I know of players that picked a game just because the dev used that daz model. What people are pissed about is the fact the escort turns out to be MC's sister... those flavors don't mix well... think onions and ice cream. If you make a short story where the only available love interest caters to a specific target audience, don't be surprised if the players judge it harshly when the love interest doesn't meet the minimum criteria requirements
Depraved Awakening is garbage, the dialogues goes from "I love you" to "I wanna be your sex slave" in microseconds
 

Stringy Bob

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The android download seems quite large foe a 1st release. You might want to crunch the files further WEBP is surpringly good at high compression ratios.
 

Stringy Bob

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Not much to the game yet, but promising so far. I like that she doesnt appear a total virgin. Every woman in the MC's life being a virgin gets tiring. And resist any pressure to retcon that. A lot of people are not going to like that she's an escort, but its an really interesting twist. I don't know what your plans are but possibility there could be a subplot where the MC helps her find a better paying job so she can quit doing that.

I look forward to meeting the other characters, like the friends she mentioned, or perhaps other women from the agency.

They took the money and ran?
At least she dint leave him in a bathtub full of ice short a kidney.
 

hwzy123

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Jan 7, 2022
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Good game! Just ask for my personal interest, is it possible to tail after Jen and voyeur her doing the “job” silently in future version? I mean do you have a NTR path’s plan?
 

drfronkonstinmd

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Not much to the game yet, but promising so far. I like that she doesnt appear a total virgin. Every woman in the MC's life being a virgin gets tiring. And resist any pressure to retcon that. A lot of people are not going to like that she's an escort, but its an really interesting twist. I don't know what your plans are but possibility there could be a subplot where the MC helps her find a better paying job so she can quit doing that.

I look forward to meeting the other characters, like the friends she mentioned, or perhaps other women from the agency.
Good game! Just ask for my personal interest, is it possible to tail after Jen and voyeur her doing the “job” silently in future version? I mean do you have a NTR path’s plan?
Thanks! All of this has been partially answered before, but just so you know:

- Yes, she has previous sexual experience. That's never going to change. I can suspend disbelief for the weirdest things, but to me, it just doesn't feel right that a woman with that body who also decides to get boobs that big, doesn't have a rather strong sexual drive. She's had previous relationships and, only from time to time, a customer will also get lucky, but she normally keeps sex as part of her private life.

- Like I said in previous comments, this started as a very small project to test the waters. I've got longer scripts ready to start as soon as I finish this game, but if people are very interested, I could maybe expand it a little more. The main problem is that, for this story, I wanted to keep everything between these two characters. Adding Jen's friends, Lindsey or even a couple of customers to the mix would probably turn this into a harem / mild NTR experience and I'm not sure that's what I want. But anyway, if there's enough demand, I may think about it.
 

hwzy123

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Thanks! All of this has been partially answered before, but just so you know:

- Yes, she has previous sexual experience. That's never going to change. I can suspend disbelief for the weirdest things, but to me, it just doesn't feel right that a woman with that body who also decides to get boobs that big, doesn't have a rather strong sexual drive. She's had previous relationships and, only from time to time, a customer will also get lucky, but she normally keeps sex as part of her private life.

- Like I said in previous comments, this started as a very small project to test the waters. I've got longer scripts ready to start as soon as I finish this game, but if people are very interested, I could maybe expand it a little more. The main problem is that, for this story, I wanted to keep everything between these two characters. Adding Jen's friends, Lindsey or even a couple of customers to the mix would probably turn this into a harem / mild NTR experience and I'm not sure that's what I want. But anyway, if there's enough demand, I may think about it.
Keep doing this project as the way you want then, I’m looking forward to see your next game! Voyeurism or NTR is just my personal favorite, you can see it as one of a suggestion.
 

BTLD

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Adding Jen's friends, Lindsey or even a couple of customers to the mix would probably turn this into a harem / mild NTR experience and I'm not sure that's what I want. But anyway, if there's enough demand, I may think about it.
"But anyway, if there's enough demand, I may think about it"
and this is what made me put this game on ignore list.
though I do wish the dev the best of luck with his VN and hope he makes it a successful one.
 

hwzy123

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Jan 7, 2022
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"But anyway, if there's enough demand, I may think about it"
and this is what made me put this game on ignore list.
though I do wish the dev the best of luck with his VN and hope he makes it a successful one.
Oh god…I think I have done something bad for the dev…
 

BTLD

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Oh god…I think I have done something bad for the dev…
doubt you did anything wrong :p
that line that I quoted just shows (to me at least) that :
1. dev has no story and is making it as he goes
2. the one with big bucks gets to set how this VN will go or his future VNs go (and while I'm not really 110% opposed to that it just goes to show that a vanilla VN can go NTR/Sharing/Swinging route fast, so what I'm trying to say is that there's too much uncertainity with him so as far as I'm concerned I can't support something like that)
again those are just my thoughts, they may or may not be applicable to the dev, just how I see them.
 

goulet1995

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Thanks! All of this has been partially answered before, but just so you know:

- Yes, she has previous sexual experience. That's never going to change. I can suspend disbelief for the weirdest things, but to me, it just doesn't feel right that a woman with that body who also decides to get boobs that big, doesn't have a rather strong sexual drive. She's had previous relationships and, only from time to time, a customer will also get lucky, but she normally keeps sex as part of her private life.

- Like I said in previous comments, this started as a very small project to test the waters. I've got longer scripts ready to start as soon as I finish this game, but if people are very interested, I could maybe expand it a little more. The main problem is that, for this story, I wanted to keep everything between these two characters. Adding Jen's friends, Lindsey or even a couple of customers to the mix would probably turn this into a harem / mild NTR experience and I'm not sure that's what I want. But anyway, if there's enough demand, I may think about it.
wasnt it said previously that she didnt have sex with the customers guess it was a good idea to wait on this one
 
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drfronkonstinmd

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doubt you did anything wrong :p
that line that I quoted just shows (to me at least) that :
1. dev has no story and is making it as he goes
2. the one with big bucks gets to set how this VN will go or his future VNs go (and while I'm not really 110% opposed to that it just goes to show that a vanilla VN can go NTR/Sharing/Swinging route fast, so what I'm trying to say is that there's too much uncertainity with him so as far as I'm concerned I can't support something like that)
again those are just my thoughts, they may or may not be applicable to the dev, just how I see them.
I'm sorry, but you got it all wrong.

The full script has been written for quite some time, and like I said from the beginning, it's a short story with just two characters. In fact, it ends the morning after the night it starts. I have no plans to expand it any further because I find the ending quite satisfactory and I also have other stories I'd like to start working on when I finish this project.

However, if people play the full game, they really like the characters and the plot and want to know what could happen next, I could think about doing a "Part II", but even if that was the case, it wouldn't be an extension of this project, but another episode in their lives.
 
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drfronkonstinmd

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wasnt it said previously that she didnt have sex with the customers guess it was a good idea to wait on this one
It depends on how you see these things.

If you don't mind about a female character having previous sexual experience with other people before the game starts, then you're good to go, because this game is not about sharing or NTR and it will never feature a scene in which you can see Jen having any kind of intimate contact with any other person apart from MC. Again, it's a short story about this first night and part of the morning after and it just focuses on MC and Jen.

On the other hand, if you consider a couple of quick comments about previous customers or just her line of work to be NTR content, then skip it.

I honestly think many people who are automatically discarding the game because of Jen's side job, would probably change their minds after playing it. But again, it's all up to you.
 
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