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Vanderer Consistently like what you have done with the plot, played it after a while so there was some content piled up but it was definitely a treat to watch. The lore, spells, magical abilities and obviously the harem growing is pleasant to experience. Also as the plot is progressing think another major battle might not be too far away. Plus think it might be much more intense than the previous ones, just having that intuition so definitely intriguing how the story pans out. Saw the new content just around Easter so certainly it was a nice surprise and happy Easter to you(in case you celebrate it, apologies for the assumption if you don't).

Thanks for reading Dev, best wishes for ahead:)
 

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quite a lot of mislabeled lines and general misspellings this update, was it rushed or something? quality control usually much better here
 

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gee another DAZ3d game.... i dont know whats getting more boring DAZ3d games or RPGMaker games....
 

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gee another DAZ3d game.... i dont know whats getting more boring DAZ3d games or RPGMaker games....
some people have strong dislikes for certain engine's or programs used,i share your dislike for RPGmaker
if this one is on your list you could skip it,but i find the story well done so if you give it a try you might not regret it
 
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I sincerely thank you for this, Vander. The fact that you did not succumb to the desire to pointlessly pad your scenes, like every "this story is a sLoW BuUurn" dumb novel writer on this site, made me appreciate TFS more.
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yeah its a balancing act , to much will feel empty and is boring, to little and the game feels rushed from event to plot to event to plot
 
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update 16b was very good. Not many VN's are good enough to read all the story, and even fewer are worth replaying every update. This is one of the few. I replay the game each update, and I still read the story each time, most VN's I tend to skip most of the dialog, as it is just fluff and has no interest. The Fiery Scion is just a good adventure every time.

As always I eagerly look forward to the next update.
Thanks again.
Peace.

and I think my favorite girl is Monica
 

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God damn Vanderer. You did it again, great update as usual. Really liking Deborah's looks, beauties with short hair and glasses are way too rare in LIs. Really hoping she'll keep the glasses on all the time.

Now few nitpicks for the update, will need some proof reading and checking through code on who is actually saying stuff. Before talking to Sariel, one of Athagan's lines were attributed to MC.

Also boo for making Maria and Solange stand while others got to sit in the ship, either they should also get chairs or split sitting on Avila's, MC's or Athagan's lap.

Edit. I also did notice the wording on Sariel's offer for the breeding contract, can't wait for breeding Sariel in the future. :love:

Second edit. Athagan seems to be missing an arm when he says the line "A Strong one? She is the best there ever was! The bear! She never lost
Thanks, I will look into it.

Deborah is nice, yes, I wanted to have one girl who gave that "'secretary" look, you know.

As for Sariel...
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I may have misinterpreted the scene, but pretty sure in the end it wasn't "just" a breeding contract ... you're probably still not wrong though.
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quite a lot of mislabeled lines and general misspellings this update, was it rushed or something? quality control usually much better here
No, not really, bigger than average though. I pass the text through two correctors, and patch typos that are reported, but I am not a native english speaker...my bad, I'll try better.

yeah its a balancing act , to much will feel empty and is boring, to little and the game feels rushed from event to plot to event to plot
Exactly. You need some dialogue to have a good story, and characters that you care for, but like in that case where the MC would just repeat what he just said 2 minutes ago, I think it's better to just "skip" it.
 

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Seems rather disrespectful and demeaning to be a breeding dog basically and then on top of it,
Having no claim on your own children,
Should have given us the option to reject,
Its not like MC isn't already drowning in pussy that MC needs to put himself down to the level of animal to get some.
This is where my journey and patronage ends with this game.
Loved it till now.
 
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Seems rather disrespectful and demeaning to be a breeding dog basically and then on top of it,
Having no claim on your own children,
Should have given us the option to reject,
Its not like MC isn't already drowning in pussy that MC needs to put himself down to the level of animal to get some.
This is where my journey and patronage ends with this game.
Loved it till now.
Sorry to hear it.

But I disagree, one of the things that the MC demanded was basically that the Princess become his concubine. The future Queen, with a man, unmarried...

The Royal Family is the one that demeaned themselves to have the MC's children in their bloodline. And he also negociated rights over his children, notably the acces to them. Children that include the future Queen... They not going to bear his name, but will be recognized as his.

Basically, he got everything he wanted. Including a great advantage politically. It also bring safety to his family. All he has to do is take a bunch of hotties as his women...I am sorry, but the choice is easilly made. He fucks the hotties.

Now, if it's not your thing and put you off, I am sorry to hear it, you sadly cannot please everyone.
 
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