Choices begin in the Second Panel, and I'll see what I can do about the text box (still learning!). As for the MC...Well there isn't one really, it's the couple. Sorry that I haven't followed the reliable pattern laid out by all the other developers, but it's the way I write a story. As to updates - this is the First Panel of a story called ' The Three Panels' so you're probably right, there will only be two updates...guess what they will be called!