Kadajko

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'' This is a visual novel with no choice buttons, so you won't get stuck or lost. I'm sick of all those bullshit maze choices games that just make you lose your temper. ''

Games with choice and branching are fun. However a game without any choices, where the author just tells the story they want to tell is infinitely better than games with a bunch of meaningless choices that are just there for the sake of choices.
 
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"This is a visual novel with no choice buttons, so you won't get stuck or lost. I'm sick of all those bullshit maze choices games that just make you lose your temper."
Sandboxes are the only thing I tend to lose my temper with (these days I simply ignore ones with the sandbox tag). Choice is good as long as it's intuitive and actually makes a difference in outcomes, as then you can guide your own story rather than be stuck with the one you are given (particularly if you are picky with who you fuck and how in porno VNs). Riding a Harley is far more fun than riding a train. But I get it, short KN's are easier to do as a first project to learn with rather than having to deal with a bunch of variables and if/thens.
 
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Sisters pretty, I liked that it was short and to the point. But man, that bush is such a turnoff, looks like hes licking an actual cat. Hope the future versions trim that thing.
I like natural/hairy ones for a change. 99% of AVN pussies are bald, tired of looking at them (in real porn too), about as much as if every girl shaved her head too, that would get old quick as they would then all look like more or less the same cancer patient. The only bald ones needed should be attached to 10yo lolis. And it's not hard to eat hairy pussy, just spread the flavor saver where it's still not hairy and lick there. Of course if she's attractive enough to where I'd wanna do that in the first place I'd use that shit for dental floss.
 
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Firaxius

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Nice short VN, liked the story and how it unfolded, the sister is very cute, though can't see them as twins, it like the brother was made by another uglier man, while the sister has all the good features from mother and a cute man, but then again the brother still looked better then her ex boyfriend, that guy was a total ugly frog. Anyway keep up the good work, I'm sure you even capable to make larger VN with more a deeper story.
 
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Saint Blackmoor

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Hi, I'm 'The Narrator.'
"I read a lot of stories on the internet, and I wanted to see some action as well, not just imagine it.
So since I couldn't do it with real characters, I thought of doing it with virtual ones."
"So I pushed myself hard for a few months to learn how to create and render 3D scenes.
I finally did and made a visual novel. I'm very proud of myself, and I hope you like it."
"So I'm going to take the best stories on the internet and bring as many as I can to life."
"This visual novel has no choice buttons so you won't get stuck or lost.
I'm sick of all those bullshit maze choices games that make you lose your temper."
"Cheers!​
New overview.
 
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Lust0ne

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I like natural/hairy ones for a change. 99% of AVN pussies are bald, tired of looking at them (in real porn too), about as much as if every girl shaved her head too, that would get old quick as they would then all look like more or less the same cancer patient. The only bald ones needed should be attached to 10yo lolis. And it's not hard to eat hairy pussy, just spread the flavor saver where it's still not hairy and lick there. Of course if she's attractive enough to where I'd wanna do that in the first place I'd use that shit for dental floss.
Ditto on the bush, seeing to many bald pussies just ain't right!
 

bamachine

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Ditto on the bush, seeing to many bald pussies just ain't right!
Yep, variety is the spice of life. I saw my first live snapper back in the mid 80's. It looked like it had a wildebeest caught in a headlock and was extra fragrant(not smelly, but musky). I came away with the glazed doughnut mouth and enjoyed the scent for the rest of the night, then got a quick reminder sniff of my upper lip in the morning before taking my morning shower.
 
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