VN Ren'Py The Fog [v1.0] [-Taz-]

[Titablue]

Wow, your game is impressive. I really like all the possible choices, especially between the two characters. I've tried all the paths and I feel like it's going to be a very good game. I really like your writing; it's both intriguing and funny (the main character made me laugh more than once). I can't wait to play the next update. There are a lot of animations; I wasn't expecting that. It's really cool and exciting We get to the sex scenes quickly, without it being unrealistic. The characters and the environment are great too. Honestly, I don't see any flaws except that I'll have to wait for the sequel.
Thank you so much for this prologue!

 

[-Taz-]

Wow, your game is impressive. I really like all the possible choices, especially between the two characters. I've tried all the paths and I feel like it's going to be a very good game. I really like your writing; it's both intriguing and funny (the main character made me laugh more than once). I can't wait to play the next update. There are a lot of animations; I wasn't expecting that. It's really cool and exciting We get to the sex scenes quickly, without it being unrealistic. The characters and the environment are great too. Honestly, I don't see any flaws except that I'll have to wait for the sequel.
Thank you so much for this prologue!

Welcome and thanks !
Don't hesitate to join my discord if you want news on the game's progress.

 

[Hawkeye3d]

I promise you there is no treachery.
This is my first game and unlike many developers, I model and texture my own characters. I did my best but I'm sorry if you find it "weird".
He may be ugly to you, but he's got money. And that's more important than looks.

"There seems to be a failure of communication here"
JK
Weird is not bad in all western and a lot of far eastern societies. In fact is a lot it is a compliment.
By way, I would like to give you for your first attempt. Just really build thick skin and you will be great at this.
Good luck

 

[-Taz-]

"There seems to be a failure of communication here"
JK
Weird is not bad in all western and a lot of far eastern societies. In fact is a lot it is a compliment.
By way, I would like to give you for your first attempt. Just really build thick skin and you will be great at this.
Good luck

Thank you for your review.

I've taken the feedback into account and have already improved the appearance of my characters. I'm sorry you're disappointed that this is only the prologue, but I want to build a coherent and interesting story. I spent a year learning, modeling the environments and characters. So I wanted to offer you this prologue to get feedback, to see if my content interests anyone or if I'm going in the wrong direction. It also allows me to practice in a less complex environment than the supermarket, with fewer characters, while still providing a few sex scenes.
Personally, I don't like games that offer too many sex scenes right from the start; I prefer to build desire and offer a good storyline.
I hope you'll try the next update; it will be the path where the protagonist returns home, and certainly the beginning of their arrival at the supermarket.
See you soon, I hope.

 

[Bayadend]

Imma gonna try it.