f96zonetrooper

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The last version of the game (v0.1.0) with "The Freshman Year_CURRENT.html" is kind of a mess.
- as mentioned by others, there is a missing tag <<nobr>>
- the image link for the lingerie shop "img\mall\lingerie.jpg" is broken
- several spelling errors like "Pervesion", "Chasity", ...
- narrative switches between past and present tense
- On day 2 there is the option to study at the university and a "study and test" system is explained but after that the study option is no longer available as if the study system was disabled.
- visiting the bar sets money to 9,999 $
- the living room contains a shortcut to a late game scene "Suck the dildo"
- there is a probably new repeatable scene where mc can have sex with Mia in the bathroom in the morning. This scene does not check if mc is in chastity so when the game progresses the scene will likely be inconsistent with the story progress
...

To me it seems that the last version is kind of work-in-progress and test-version where several changes were coded to quickly test new scenes or concentrate on the main story without dealing with study and money grind.

Edit :
On there are still links to ALL old versions starting with v0.01 (=week 1) and eg the study and test mechanic at the university worked in v0.01. It seems that the dev broke the game while adding more content.
The original UI in v0.01 without buttons etc also looked better than current version.
 
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f96zonetrooper

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The story progression does not make sense :

- MC goes to university and starts to live with 2 female roommates (Yvi and Mia), but one of the 2 girls isn't even in the game. All interactions are with Mia.
- After orientation at the university mc returns home, accidently watches Mia having sex with a guy and automatically masturbates to that hot scene which is noticed by Mia. (In a story with 2 female roomies this actually also could have been a lesbian scene with both girls, allowing the story to go in a different direction.)
- Next day Mia talks to mc about the incident and demands mc to be a good boy otherwise it is literally Game Over.
(At this point other games of this genre usually would apply safety measures : blackmail mc, put him in chastity, ... )
- MC tries to make up for the incident, prepares dinner for Mia and has sex with her unlocking a repeatable daily sex event.
- Mia invites mc to a (TV) movie night and asks him to join her for an upcoming party.

The hint system of the game then explains to the player that mc can only do this task if mc is in chastity.
"Go to the dinner party with $roomie. You need to have some clothes on [and current version wear a chasity]"
At that point chastity isn't even mentioned in the game ... the sex shop at the Mall is disabled and the relationship with Katy from the university club is just starting. If mc joins Mia in the morning in the bathroom, she happily plays with his dick, so why chastity for the party?

(Hint : At some point weeks later Katy will give mc a chastity cage to wear for their porn project and mc can do the party event with Mia, but the progression is completely fucked up.)
 
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