I specifically referenced police TV shows in my post, not real life, so swing and a miss there bud. Nobody (including me) would want a realistic portrail of police work in their game because that would mostly revolve around doing paperwork. And yeah, I do mean US cops because the game is pretty obviously set in the States. No parochialism necessary - unless you think there's a lot of girls with southern accents working cornfields in Africa. So having the depiction of American cops in your game mirror depictions from other American media would make sense to the audience. Even for people like me who don't live in the US.
If the game was set in Japan or Russia or South America it still wouldn't explain why characters who are grown-ass adults routinely act like sulky teenagers. Or why a detective would constantly spill details about a confidential police investigation to every pair of tits that crosses his path. Seriously, I wouldn't trust this MC with my lunch order, let alone solving a murder. Criticizing story and characterisation in a game that is heavy on both is fair game. Especially when the renders and animations are top notch. I don't think I'm alone in wishing NLT's writing was of the same quality.
You are definitely not alone in wanting a more coherent, dramatic, better plotted, internally consistent story with better narration driving the game forward, as well as deeper and more intimate relationships developed between fleshed-out characters of substance.
I've said so several times myself and so have others all to no avail.
When it comes to NLT Media's Patreon base developers deliberately pitch their games at a lowest common denominator level, in order to please as many customers as possible to maximise return, poll subscribers, and take direction from supporters as per game content directly, more than often boiling down to numerous long lists of fantastical and sometimes anatomically impossible sexual acts, worsening matters as far as storytelling goes IMHO.
Ideally, personally, I absolutely would like a story of comparable quality to accompany the art but twice-monthly updates probably rule this out due to time constraints placed on NLT Media staff.
There are several games on this site that show this is possible having brilliant art and storytelling. Perhaps one day NLT Media will rise to that high watermark of skill one day and join the small select elite, whose lewd games qualify as genuine erotic entertainments rather than leaden and lowly wank fodder, offering the lonely and frustrated a means of solitary release.
