anoymoose

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Hi Dev. Interesting premise you have. If you read these comments, I'd highly recommend you look into the differences between your and you're; their, there, and they're; and two, to, and too." They all mean different things and using in them in the incorrect context can really pull the reader out of their immersion. Also, black border around the text, please, because words are getting washed out. Good luck with your project.
 

PtsZts

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If you want to support the development of this game, please give me your feedback. Good, Bad, or Ugly...I want to hear it. This is super early so every advice helps steer me towards the path of righteousness.
I think the option to change MC's name should be added in future updates. It's a basic thing for me, at least in this type of VN.
 
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Acidcola

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Dev, please note: polyandry is many males to 1 female. When it is many females to 1 male, it is called polygyny. Also during minigame it says Orgasim instead of Orgasm, and horde instead of hoard.
 
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Kalenz123

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I don't think I've ever seen such an obnoxious textbox. Someone made this, looked at it and though "that's a good idea".
 

GuyPerson1911

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Game is definitely a bit rough around the edges but has potential. Would love to see MC be able to keep tabs and watch the progress of the women that he makes into mothers
 
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Silentdeath8

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If you read this Dev please make-up your mind, the girl just get out of shower & was totaly naked before puting a towel, she will have sex... So why the useless panty ? when & why did she put it ?
 

Level 88

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Oct 12, 2024
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dev, some advice. please let us name mc and also make a textbox so we can adjust the darkness to read text because it felt impossible to read anything
Yeah I was worried that would happen, will adjust for the next update. Thanks for the feedback!
 
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Level 88

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If you read this Dev please make-up your mind, the girl just get out of shower & was totaly naked before puting a towel, she will have sex... So why the useless panty ? when & why did she put it ?
Will do, thanks for the feed back, I really appreciate it! I'll make sure to keep up the attention to detail moving forward.
 

Level 88

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Hi Dev. Interesting premise you have. If you read these comments, I'd highly recommend you look into the differences between your and you're; their, there, and they're; and two, to, and too." They all mean different things and using in them in the incorrect context can really pull the reader out of their immersion. Also, black border around the text, please, because words are getting washed out. Good luck with your project.
XD Ahh you noticed, yeah did not properly spell check before releasing it. Yeah, I will make sure future updates are properly checked before hitting that release button.

I like the black border idea, I'll check it out and give it a shot. Thanks for the feedback!
 

Level 88

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I don't think I've ever seen such an obnoxious textbox. Someone made this, looked at it and though "that's a good idea".
Ooofff, yeah good point, it does look a bit tacky. I'll experiment with some other ideas that look a bit more elegant.

At least it gives me the excuse to play some more hentai games for......."Research".....

Anyway, thanks for the feedback!
 

Level 88

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I think the option to change MC's name should be added in future updates. It's a basic thing for me, at least in this type of VN.
Yeah, I have the code for this commented out as it was giving me some weird bugs. I see a lot of similar comments so I am goind to implament that first while it is fresh in my mind.
 

Level 88

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I'm surprised in this day and age there are still developers starting new games with just out of the box Honey Select models and backgrounds without any mods or post processing...:oops:
Love the comment, looks like I better step up my game moving forward!