anoymoose

Newbie
Apr 2, 2023
20
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Hi Dev. Interesting premise you have. If you read these comments, I'd highly recommend you look into the differences between your and you're; their, there, and they're; and two, to, and too." They all mean different things and using in them in the incorrect context can really pull the reader out of their immersion. Also, black border around the text, please, because words are getting washed out. Good luck with your project.
 

PtsZts

Newbie
Jan 22, 2024
41
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If you want to support the development of this game, please give me your feedback. Good, Bad, or Ugly...I want to hear it. This is super early so every advice helps steer me towards the path of righteousness.
I think the option to change MC's name should be added in future updates. It's a basic thing for me, at least in this type of VN.
 

Acidcola

Newbie
Nov 2, 2018
90
33
Dev, please note: polyandry is many males to 1 female. When it is many females to 1 male, it is called polygyny. Also during minigame it says Orgasim instead of Orgasm, and horde instead of hoard.
 
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Kalenz123

Active Member
Dec 13, 2018
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I don't think I've ever seen such an obnoxious textbox. Someone made this, looked at it and though "that's a good idea".
 

GuyPerson1911

Newbie
Sep 2, 2020
17
11
Game is definitely a bit rough around the edges but has potential. Would love to see MC be able to keep tabs and watch the progress of the women that he makes into mothers
 
  • Yay, update!
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