VN HTML Completed The Goblin's Pet [CYOA v1.0] [Aphrodite]

[l1lym]

The Goblin's Pet Chapter 2 bad ends have just been posted on the online public version!! This includes 100+ sex CGs, lots of my filthiest writing ever, and branching paths - including the unlockable Broodmare bad end, enjoy!!!

You can play it here, I will upload it here as a download relatively soon:

You must be registered to see the links

Edit: In order to unlock and play the bad ends, you need to "Call out" to the miners despite Snib telling you not to.

There are branches WITHIN this bad end, so you would have to play it a couple times to see everything. Once you reach the end once though, there is a bad end gallery accessible from the main screen:

 

[domoon]

First of all, I must apologize because my English is not strong.

Oh my, this is so much more than I expected. I thought this was just a remake, but this is so amazing. I'm so thankful you added so much footage, I can't help but imagine the embarrassment Elise will face in the future.//
I love this version of Elise so much that I don't want her to turn back into a man after the Goblin City incident. Haha.

 

[Karkhel]

Is there an update on subscribestar or just devlog?

 

[Great730]

The Goblin's Pet Chapter 2 bad ends have just been posted on the online public version!! This includes 100+ sex CGs, lots of my filthiest writing ever, and branching paths - including the unlockable Broodmare bad end, enjoy!!!

You can play it here, I will upload it here as a download relatively soon:

You must be registered to see the links

Edit: In order to unlock and play the bad ends, you need to "Call out" to the miners despite Snib telling you not to.

There are branches WITHIN this bad end, so you would have to play it a couple times to see everything. Once you reach the end once though, there is a bad end gallery accessible from the main screen:

View attachment 5434066

I definitely like this remake, but the only thing that bothers me is that in the previous part, Eliza was more toned. She was always curvy with wide hips and big breasts, but here she seems to be overweight in the abdominal area. If you can make her belly more defined, that would be great.

 

[l1lym]

Is there an update on subscribestar or just devlog?

There's an update there.

I definitely like this remake, but the only thing that bothers me is that in the previous part, Eliza was more toned. She was always curvy with wide hips and big breasts, but here she seems to be overweight in the abdominal area. If you can make her belly more defined, that would be great.

Apologies but in this case, this is the way she is "meant" to be, not very toned - her body is meant to be more along the lines of a "sex toy" rather than super toned / fit. The reason she appeared toned in the 1st one is due to the Daz renders, it would come out making her a lot more rigid.

This is kind of canonically her body type, and it was originally what I had in mind when initially writing the story (before the 1st CYOA), but it wasnt easy to get this appearance in DAZ

 

[AdmiralPhoenix]

man i gotta say that this is the first AI art that i actually like.
the MC looks soo hot .

keep up the good work

 

[Billnythescienceguy]

its super annoying that devs change platforms so often even when you pay you need to create account after account after account with all your data.. its shitty

what are you referring too because its been the same website and same thread the whole time I've been following for a while are you sure that your posting on the right thread or did you mean to post to another thread???

 

[tseug]

It's me or gems super rare or not exist yet in text? Found zero.

 

[95218]

It's me or gems super rare or not exist yet in text? Found zero.

I think I found 24 so far? try hovering your mouse over sentences with lots of aliteration to get the sparkles to show. You can also hit tab to get your browser to jump to it if theres one on a page but thats a bit cheaty.

 

[Great730]

There's an update there.



Apologies but in this case, this is the way she is "meant" to be, not very toned - her body is meant to be more along the lines of a "sex toy" rather than super toned / fit. The reason she appeared toned in the 1st one is due to the Daz renders, it would come out making her a lot more rigid. View attachment 5435213 View attachment 5435216 View attachment 5435219 View attachment 5435214

This is kind of canonically her body type, and it was originally what I had in mind when initially writing the story (before the 1st CYOA), but it wasnt easy to get this appearance in DAZ

I'm sorry, but I just don't like fat women.

 

[tseug]

I think I found 24 so far? try hovering your mouse over sentences with lots of aliteration to get the sparkles to show. You can also hit tab to get your browser to jump to it if theres one on a page but thats a bit cheaty.

I mean in reworked version, not original.

 

[95218]

I mean in reworked version, not original.

Yeah thats what I'm talking about too.

 

[Tanthalas]

Don't hover over the sentences, you just need to click on every paragraph, it's kinda easy. There are gems on almost every page.

 

[slavegal]

There's an update there.



Apologies but in this case, this is the way she is "meant" to be, not very toned - her body is meant to be more along the lines of a "sex toy" rather than super toned / fit. The reason she appeared toned in the 1st one is due to the Daz renders, it would come out making her a lot more rigid. View attachment 5435213 View attachment 5435216 View attachment 5435219 View attachment 5435214

This is kind of canonically her body type, and it was originally what I had in mind when initially writing the story (before the 1st CYOA), but it wasnt easy to get this appearance in DAZ

It's not easy for AI to maintain the character's body shape consistently throughout. Strictly speaking, the body shape changes for every single rendering.

 

[l1lym]

Yes, there’s definitely going to be some variation, at least moreso than a 3d model. But for me it’s consistent enough that it doesn’t take me out of it like the variations in style did with the 1st version (which people can always still play).

As for her being “fat”, that is likely an Eastern vs Western beauty standards thing. I don’t see her as fat but that’s subjective

 

[l1lym]

I mean in reworked version, not original.

There are a lot more now, but the animation is different. Now the text sparkles instead of blurs, so you will just have to look for different things when reading.

I tried to include one on every page pretty much.

 

[tseug]

There are a lot more now, but the animation is different. Now the text sparkles instead of blurs, so you will just have to look for different things when reading.

I tried to include one on every page pretty much.

hmm, didn't noticed any changes on mouse hover. Probably need to check in another browser.

 

[Hidden_Pork]

As for "Bad Ends" do you mean there are new "Bad ends" pural or just different variations of one bad end because for the life of me i could not find more than one but I found 3 versions of one

 

[Whaft]

I mean in reworked version, not original.

There are plenty I have 10 in the start of chapter 2

 

[l1lym]

As for "Bad Ends" do you mean there are new "Bad ends" pural or just different variations of one bad end because for the life of me i could not find more than more but I found 3 versions of one

Yes sorry, I meant the multiple versions of one. There will be one per chapter but each one will often have multiple sex scene branches