HTML The Good Life [v0.1] [Veni_Vidi_Vici]

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Lednacek

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As i said before
i started to work on this game and decided that i want to first know what people wanted to play
so i posted this game just to understand if its in the right direction...
You spent more time setting up the patreon than the game itself. This site is full of degenerates. No matter what you make there will be people who like it and people who hate it. The only thing all people hate are unfinished games with stupid paywalls.
 
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i see the tags have been added. but the question still stands, wanna know if i should just ignore.
are we gonna be able to change mc name
is futa/trans and sissification gonna be 100% avoidable "as in you prevent it for ever happening" or simply a turn off content button.
About the sissy content it will be avoidable in the next update
the name maybe...
 
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I understand the thought process and good intentions behind wanting second opinions to figure out what needs to be improved in your game. However, I disagree with releasing an unfinished build as the game's first impression. I understand how difficult it can be to create a game up to decent standards, even for using Twine (I say this because in my opinion it seems the easiest to fully learn, as opposed to something like Unity), but that doesn't mean release a game that's technically playable but unenjoyable due to it being unfinished.

It's important to remember that what you are releasing is directly going to determine your success. I agree with the other comments that setting up a Patreon immediately is a mistake. Someone said it perfectly in the thread, but another reason is, if you released this hoping to receive comments telling you everything that's wrong with this game, why would you then expect them to financially support something they didn't enjoy? Even if you didn't expect support from them financially so early, the Patreon being there gives off the wrong impression.

Regardless, you should remember not everyone will like your game. Even if it is up to a quality standard. As developers, releasing a game is for the people's enjoyment and satisfaction, but not everyone will like it. So please don't be discouraged when reading the comments.

If this were my project and these are the comments I'm listening to, I'd try my best to implement the following in the next update:
- Format
- Content
- Personality


I'm unsure if you'll even see this message. But in hopes that you do, please remember I'm not trying to degrade your game, I have no room to talk and judge another's work. I'm just trying to provide some constructive criticism. I simply enjoy seeing new creators rise and receive love for what they have created so I sincerely hope your game is flooded with positivity in the future.
First of all thank you for the time to respond my game, and thanks for doing it with respect

now, i did understand my mistake with the patreon, i just wanted everything to be set up and to have another place to talk with people who played this game...
i really known that the game is just at his first steps, and no one would ever subscribe to my patreon...even with free sub at the start...but i agree with you on that part

what do you mean about the format?
the second two i knew, but what about the format?
 
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You spent more time setting up the patreon than the game itself. This site is full of degenerates. No matter what you make there will be people who like it and people who hate it. The only thing all people hate are unfinished games with stupid paywalls.
as i said before, i posted this just to know if its the right direction, and i'm glad i did it, because i wasn't:LOL:

and about the patreon, it wont give you anything for the game... and its free, so what paywall?
 

SinisterGames

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First of all thank you for the time to respond my game, and thanks for doing it with respect

now, i did understand my mistake with the patreon, i just wanted everything to be set up and to have another place to talk with people who played this game...
i really known that the game is just at his first steps, and no one would ever subscribe to my patreon...even with free sub at the start...but i agree with you on that part

what do you mean about the format?
the second two i knew, but what about the format?
What I mean by format is having a plan. My first impression was there's not really a plan, there's just random sex scenes without any build up towards them. Even if you don't want much of a story. There could always be substance when it comes to the H-Scenes. Also by format I mean the overall UI. It looks fine as it is, but the details are slightly lacking in my opinion. Some background images would do a world of good.
 
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What I mean by format is having a plan. My first impression was there's not really a plan, there's just random sex scenes without any build up towards them. Even if you don't want much of a story. There could always be substance when it comes to the H-Scenes. Also by format I mean the overall UI. It looks fine as it is, but the details are slightly lacking in my opinion. Some background images would do a world of good.
i understand, there is a story in the next update, but with the family members its going to stay the same for now...
except from Mark that get an option if you want to make him sissy or not...
 

Lednacek

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as i said before, i posted this just to know if its the right direction, and i'm glad i did it, because i wasn't:LOL:

and about the patreon, it wont give you anything for the game... and its free, so what paywall?
you dont have paywalls. i just stated what was generally abhored by all people on the site. you will find fans and haters no matter what you do, dont bother with asking before you do something. later on you can do poll. those tends to be quite usefull as they are taken by people who bothered to look at the game and not just some random visitor.
 
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you dont have paywalls. i just stated what was generally abhored by all people on the site. you will find fans and haters no matter what you do, dont bother with asking before you do something. later on you can do poll. those tends to be quite usefull as they are taken by people who bothered to look at the game and not just some random visitor.
Oh sorry, i didn't understand you
thank you!
 

Draevis

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So, there's an error at the neighbor's house about an improperly closed IF tag. It seems you can have the conversation with the neighbor that's supposed to happen after you fuck his wife before you fuck her. When you finally get to interact with the neighbor's wife there's an improperly formed <span> tag that causes all that <span> HTML to be rendered as part of the text rather than just coloring the text. Also I'm pretty sure if you advance time in the evening it takes you to the afternoon.

I for one like the usual porn actresses, so I'll give this another chance when an update comes out. After all the talk in the intro to the game about not grinding or keeping stats it's odd to see a STAT link where you keep track of stats. Also, can you reduce the amount of verticle whitespace? I think I missed Mark's morning interactions for a couple of days because it was whitespaced off the bottom of my screen.
 
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So, there's an error at the neighbor's house about an improperly closed IF tag. It seems you can have the conversation with the neighbor that's supposed to happen after you fuck his wife before you fuck her. When you finally get to interact with the neighbor's wife there's an improperly formed <span> tag that causes all that <span> HTML to be rendered as part of the text rather than just coloring the text. Also I'm pretty sure if you advance time in the evening it takes you to the afternoon.

I for one like the usual porn actresses, so I'll give this another chance when an update comes out. After all the talk in the intro to the game about not grinding or keeping stats it's odd to see a STAT link where you keep track of stats. Also, can you reduce the amount of verticle whitespace? I think I missed Mark's morning interactions for a couple of days because it was whitespaced off the bottom of my screen.
first, thanks, for the note about the error and for the second chance.
second, i did the stats because there will be story, and you'll need to keep track on the stats, just a little bit, but there will not be a lot of grinding, unless the people who plays this game want some grind...
 
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