VN Ren'Py The Grace of Fate [Demo] [Hentaku]

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Overview:
An abandoned child on the street meets a woman who will change his life forever.
This game in this version does not contain +18 or sexual content, it is only a Demo of the plot.
In addition, there is not even something related to minors​

Thread Updated: 2022-12-28
Release Date: 2022-12-02
Developer: Hentaku
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Censored: No
Version: Demo
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac,
Language: English, Spanish
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Hentaku234 said:
In addition, there is not even something related to minors
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Damn for the images I thought it would be a good shota game :HideThePain:.


Hentaku234 sería bueno si pudieras agregar una mejor descripción del juego,para que los jugadores tengan un mejor entendimiento de que esperar del mismo y ya que sos el creador del hilo podrías poner algunos de los tags que tienes planeados en la parte donde dice "Genre spoiler".

It would be nice if you could add a better description of the game, so that players have a better understanding of what to expect from the game and since you are the creator of the thread you could put some of the tags you have planned in the part where it says "Genre spoiler".

Good luck.
 
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Not bad for a first release!

If I may suggest a few things:
  • Change the default language to English and then make sure to fix "Carry" to "Load" or "Continue".
  • Use dissolve instead of fade. Too much fade would make you feel the game is longer than it should be.
  • Don't italicize every text - I initially thought it was players' thoughts till that moment when the woman was talking to the kid.
  • Don't use XXXXXXXX for the address :ROFLMAO: It's just me but I think that making up something is always better than doing that.
  • Get a proofreader for the English version - there are still parts where it's a bit hard to understand. While we are on this topic, remember to add the full stop at the end of the sentences.
  • Don't use a single-choice system...For example, "Follow Her" or "Go to Sara's house". Players hate it because it's pointless to insert those choices into the game; since you don't have any other choice to pick anyway so you gotta pick that specific choice. It's a "dummy" choice, basically - no use in the story.
  • Remember to insert some transition for the last scene where Sara told the MC that they are going to move. I had to roll back to see that the MC has grown into a bigger buy with a different shirt, else I would have thought that Sara called him son after just one night of him staying there.
I think that's all I can think of. Good luck with your project, dev! :giggle:
 
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DiPeppo said:
Not bad for a first release!

If I may suggest a few things:
  • Change the default language to English and then make sure to fix "Carry" to "Load" or "Continue".
  • Use dissolve instead of fade. Too much fade would make you feel the game is longer than it should be.
  • Don't italicize every text - I initially thought it was players' thoughts till that moment when the woman was talking to the kid.
  • Don't use XXXXXXXX for the address :ROFLMAO: It's just me but I think that making up something is always better than doing that.
  • Get a proofreader for the English version - there are still parts where it's a bit hard to understand. While we are on this topic, remember to add the full stop at the end of the sentences.
  • Don't use a single-choice system...For example, "Follow Her" or "Go to Sara's house". Players hate it because it's pointless to insert those choices into the game; since you don't have any other choice to pick anyway so you gotta pick that specific choice. It's a "dummy" choice, basically - no use in the story.
  • Remember to insert some transition for the last scene where Sara told the MC that they are going to move. I had to roll back to see that the MC has grown into a bigger buy with a different shirt, else I would have thought that Sara called him son after just one night of him staying there.
I think that's all I can think of. Good luck with your project, dev! :giggle:
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Thanks for the suggestions, I'll keep them in mind ;)
 
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Damn for the images I thought it would be a good shota game :HideThePain:.


Hentaku234 sería bueno si pudieras agregar una mejor descripción del juego,para que los jugadores tengan un mejor entendimiento de que esperar del mismo y ya que sos el creador del hilo podrías poner algunos de los tags que tienes planeados en la parte donde dice "Genre spoiler".

It would be nice if you could add a better description of the game, so that players have a better understanding of what to expect from the game and since you are the creator of the thread you could put some of the tags you have planned in the part where it says "Genre spoiler".

Good luck.
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Sorry but you can't that kind of content. So much for the "morality" and the rules.
 
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Hentaku234 said:
An abandoned child on the street meets a woman who will change his life forever.
This game in this version does not contain +18 or sexual content, it is only a Demo of the plot.
In addition, there is not even something related to minors​
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So the MC ain't a cute Shota plowing hot Milfs?
 
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I'll wait to next release to see if there is anything there. I am not wasting my time on a demo that has nothing in it.
 
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looks interesting and beautiful, I will look forward to new updates. but I don't think Patreon will allow the game, developer needs to switch to Subscribestar. Good luck!
 
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