VN Ren'Py The Grey Dream [Ep. 5 - Steam Halloween Side Story] [TheGreys]

[duz1nn]

Just finished , i felt that was so short :/ i mean , i was enjoying so much and then BAM the end :/
besides being so short, was good. Good models , very good quality.
Excited and looking foward to see whats coming nexts
Wish you a good luck with your project.

 

[Deleted member 3483965]

game looks good, animations are good but it'd be nice if we control had over them , just a tip for the future.

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Eerie Entity]

Was a pretty good first release, even if it was just an intro, introducing some of the characters. And I like the look of the girls that we saw so far

I would've liked if the intro hinted a little bit more about the story itself and what kind of story it will be and what it's about. But perhaps next update will do just that

Writing could use a little bit of fine tuning, though. As an example, instead of saying "I am..." all the time, it should read "I'm..." instead. Small things like that that could use a little polishing, but nothing major.

 

[Gladheim]

Those renders...omg !!! the girls looks pretty nice

 

[Frosty2000]

Femdom avoidable?? (I hope yes)

It's kinda strange that so many games which are tagged with femdom seem to catch your interest, despite you claiming every single time that you are not into it...

 

[TheGreys]

Does the game has a lot of choices and does the choices matter for the game or its a linear path? How many girls will the game have?

Some choices give you relationship points. In the following updates, they will allow you to choose different romance paths.

 

[Mister_M]

Started nicely though the ending seemed like a forced (and abrupt) way to include some sexy time. Also, it seems like MC's character changes a little bit too much imo, like I'm looking at someone different during the flashback. And tbh I'm not a fan of unavoidable sex scenes in general.

 

[fitgirlbestgirl]

Changed.

That's an improvement I suppose. But it still doesn't make me want to play your game. It still doesn't tell me anything about your game besides some boiler plate "you graduated... yada yada, life choices, whatever." Your synopsis should tell me what kind of game I'm going to play. What kind of characters and relationships can I expect? What kinds of themes and kinks will feature prominently in it?



This synopsis is terribly written (almost comically so), but it tells me all I need to know about the game. You should strive to emulate it. It's fine to leave certain plot details vague, but you need to tell players what kind of game they are in for, as you should be able to tell by all the question about the femdom tag.

 

[f96zonetrooper]

Nice renders. English is also mostly fine but misses some commata and typos.

Spoiler: Notes, commata, typing errors

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[incest lover m/s]

Any chance of including an incest tag in the future so I can give it a go?

 

[TheGreys]

Any chance of including an incest tag in the future so I can give it a go?

I have no plan of adding an incest tag.

 

[The_Dragon_Reborn]

When i saw the title The Grey Dream I was expecting some probing to be honest.

 

[mommysboiii]

femdom is so hot holly molly after estate dominante we need new femdom game

 

[HikenNoAcee]

looks good i'll try and edit.. nice renders game has potential i'll keep follow

 

[delacroix2]

wow Nice renders/music!!. Interesting game, thanks!!!.

 

[mommysboiii]

It would be great if maledom could be completely avoided!

Can maledom be avoided?

hope we can avoide it because i roleplay a beta weakling

Looks amazing. perfect to include some NTR content.

HELL YEAHHH my MANNN

 

[jdw6]

no?

It's been a tough job market IRL... so tough, it's spilling over into games. lol

 

[Cooling Prob]

OOO Judy. That poor las doesn't look happy Yes I see it all now. Abused by the Boss, runs to me for sanctuary

 

[Mirso]

A short intro, but not a bad grafik