" After working in several small-time jobs and graduating from university, you got offered a semi-decent job in an international trading company. Meanwhile, life throws many opportunities down your way, it is up to you to decide. It's time for you to wake up from the dream and face the world's facts. "
tells me you either have someone doing all the writing for you or the story is forgettable... It would be wise to write a new synopsis so interested people have any clue at all what the game is about because I literally don't have a clue after reading that.