One could argue that you are wrong on the first one. But if one insist on "correcting" the first one, I think it should be "I'm meeting up with my friend for some drinks."
But I absolutely agree with the second one.
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But I absolutely agree with the second one.
Well, not 100% wrong, I just didn't complete the sentence correctly. I knew it didn't sound right, but without a bit of my fix, it would sound wrong by itself. You finished it nicely. I was just not thinking of it that way. I was trying to keep most of what was written down as to not change too much of it.
"Meeting up with my friend" or " meeting up with a friend of mines" still means the same thing. Just said differently.
My point was that "going to go meet up", as you proposed, is redundant. Even the dev's "going to meet up" was better than that.
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quality and details of renders are impressive. animations could be better though.
the story starts picking up, but the pace is really slow. same for the relationships.
the story starts picking up, but the pace is really slow. same for the relationships.
Have you forgotten where you are and what industry this is?
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no and I still believe in my comment. Just cause it's an AVN I don't consider that porn or something that needs lewds necessarily. I think it strongly depends on the context of the game. A game that focuses on story or character development doesn't need them but it is strongly encouraged within this genre because it's the most common theme. With that being said they should only come when a developer thinks it's a good time and not feel forced , just case an AVN has lewds I don't consider it porn unless it's meant to feel more like a porn AVN rather than an Adult AVN context of the game matters. If this game was a porn AVN for example the story and character development would take a backseat and lewds would take priority. .
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Is it me or does the writing feel...incomplete?
I feel like I'm having a bad trip. Conversations end out of nowhere, random ass transitions that make no sense, abrupt/unnecessary sex scenes that add nothing to the plot and do nothing for you, the player.
The narrative takes some truly confusing turns that have had no build-up whatsoever, often leaving the readers guessing what's happening and who the MC is talking to.
But some of the best 3d models/renders I've ever seen though. Feels like they did the hard part right and then fumbled the ball when it came to the easier stuff.
I feel like I'm having a bad trip. Conversations end out of nowhere, random ass transitions that make no sense, abrupt/unnecessary sex scenes that add nothing to the plot and do nothing for you, the player.
The narrative takes some truly confusing turns that have had no build-up whatsoever, often leaving the readers guessing what's happening and who the MC is talking to.
But some of the best 3d models/renders I've ever seen though. Feels like they did the hard part right and then fumbled the ball when it came to the easier stuff.
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For me the narrative took me some time to get into and granted have to accept a lawyer doing non lawyer work. It was until the MC rescued the girl from that house when I got into the story. Can't speak about the quality of the writing or dialogue as the way I play I find personally hard to notice good vs bad writing most of the time. If I recall only 1 of the lewd scenes didn't feel random to me. Even then there is practically no build up as this game is lacking on character development to me.
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I'm still waiting for this one to grab me. I really like the renders, and most of the girls are nice and desirable, but the story has yet to drag me in. I really want it to and haven't given up. Waiting on the next update to see whether it can pull me in.
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Episode 5 - Status Update #5
Hello there,
We're back with another status update, but this one will be short.
We've finished rendering 11 more animations and will start working on the next ones next week. For the static renders, 200+ have been rendered since the last status update and are still rendering as we write this.
Lastly, we mentioned that we would be adding some additional language options with the upcoming update. As of last week, Italian translation was added to those options.
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Hello there,
We're back with another status update, but this one will be short.
We've finished rendering 11 more animations and will start working on the next ones next week. For the static renders, 200+ have been rendered since the last status update and are still rendering as we write this.
Lastly, we mentioned that we would be adding some additional language options with the upcoming update. As of last week, Italian translation was added to those options.
Previews:
The Greys
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i came for the femdom content only to find that there is none...the renders are good but the game is boring and the text oh the text is a nightmare, finaly very less sex scenes this combo made me drop this game...a pity really...
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yeah it's more story focused only a few sex scenes has made sense to me most feel like they are forced and there for no reason
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if you mean in the story , I dont recall much but that I do recall is this. Your Boss and the 2 girls's father ( forget their names right now) got shot. The MC did have to make a big choice of trying to stop it from happening or something else I forget the 2nd choice.