VN Ren'Py The Grey Dream [Ep.6 P1 Patreon Release] [TheGreys]

[Dessolos]

Am I the only who think the dev is spending like 95% of his time making the renders and the remaining 5% on writing a "all over the place"story

For me I'd say while story can be a little odd at times I feel it's more of the character deveolopment and the relationships I find more of an issue than the writing with the story. To me last I played ( i'm 2 or 3 updates behind) It really never felt I got to know the LI all that well they were kind of just there but lacked any real character deveolopment. As to me it felt like the game focused to much on the story but forgot to spend some time on the LI. ( granted the story is nothing but average and passable for AVN Standards)

 

[incest enthusiasts]

For me I'd say while story can be a little odd at times I feel it's more of the character deveolopment and the relationships I find more of an issue than the writing with the story. To me last I played ( i'm 2 or 3 updates behind) It really never felt I got to know the LI all that well they were kind of just there but lacked any real character deveolopment. As to me it felt like the game focused to much on the story but forgot to spend some time on the LI. ( granted the story is nothing but average and passable for AVN Standards)

Yeah...... It was like most of the time when there was some content with the LI it's either few dry dialogs and/or some right off the bat sex scenes and fyi trust me it doesn't get any better throughout those 2-3 updates you missed if anything I'm even more confused than when I started playing.if I were you I'd highly reconsider playing the updates.....but if I'm being really really honest the story is still kind of captivating.... even amidst the confusion

 

[DevinHesi]

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[PickerLewd]

With each new episode, Haley becomes more beautiful, so much so that she's dangerously close to catching up with her sister .