VN Ren'Py The Grey Dream [Ep.6 P1 Patreon Release] [TheGreys]

[Graywolfe]

Just started this checking it out and enjoying it so far. I noticed a reply from Jenny with the camera that we meet that seems off to me. After we tell her we have to go she says 'yeah me either' I think that should be 'too' instead. Anyway looking good and thank you for sharing this with us.

 

[blazejro]

Is there any playlist of music? Because I was looking at it via Shazaam and it's not working.

 

[shivz889]

does anyone have any idea who was the blond which showed up in the end? was it Helen or the one we et while ethan was hiding under the table? also ms. sawyer is the same gir we went skiing with?

 

[Vualen]

Looks very nice, I mean female models and animations. If adding sounds and moans, this could become one of the best looking games

 

[RandyPhoenix]

We still want to add a gallery and achievements to the game, that's why this is a beta release. Also, we might add some new scenes and animations with the full release.

So should I wait episode 3 then?

 

[desmosome]

Consider adding a text box. Use a transparency slider if you really hate the look of it or something. Some people prefer not to strain to read white text on white backgrounds.

The series renders that play automatically until you click is a bit clunky. We don't know when they will happen, so as we are clicking to read, we will skip these by accident. Then we have to roll back and view them again. And other times, we expect it to be this type of auto playing series of renders, but it's not. So we waste a few seconds waiting and nothing happens. Some idea to remedy this could be to disable clicking past these scenes. Or give some sort of indication that it's happening.

Lastly, it could just be me, but I found it rather hard to differentiate some characters. They look really similar.

Other than that, I really enjoyed the story. The game has great visual presentation. It has style. Not just in the visuals, but also in the way the characters carry themselves. The dialogues were quite good. Oh, and I always take notice of efforts to make the clothing look natural around the boobs. Nobody likes them autofit boob sockets. Anyways, good luck with the game.

 

[bobdillan]

The most successful of all media have not catered to one centric group at all, none.

Uhhhh.... Harem/Romance/Incest demographic... that dominants the most likes and highest rated 1st page on latest updates... would disagree. (And 99% be ones that didn't shoe-horn in antagonistic genres like NTR, sharing/swinging, MMF, bestiality etc.)

Unless you being way more specific tag wise.

p.s. I rewrote this comment too many times... Had to figure out how to keep it simple instead of being over-bloated with info

 

[otronegro]

Isn't "sigma" like a stoic badass guy? Like some guy that don't give a fuck or don't care if he fits or care for what others think?

I get a "nice guy" vibes in this game based on the choices that give sigma points.

I can't keep up with all these zoomers labels man

Anyways, this vn got potential... excellent renders and good enough plot, dialogue needs a bit of work though, I got confused if the chick we were supposed to buy the shares was the same we went skiing for example. There were other instances of subpar writing too.

 

[omega_rugal]

hi dev please had scenes with heels and heels job for future

 

[Skeltom]

Isn't "sigma" like a stoic badass guy? Like some guy that don't give a fuck or don't care if he fits or care for what others think?

I get a "nice guy" vibes in this game based on the choices that give sigma points.

I can't keep up with all these zoomers labels man

Anyways, this vn got potential... excellent renders and good enough plot, dialogue needs a bit of work though, I got confused if the chick we were supposed to buy the shares was the same we went skiing for example. There were other instances of subpar writing too.

Sigma Male: A male that occupies outside a social or group hierarchy; a lone wolf or maverick. If anything an Delta Male: A male without an authoritative position or role in social or group hierarchy would be more appropriate to the whole dom/sub undertone of the game so far. Maybe even Beta, but Sigma doesn't really fit.

 

[JohnF95zone]

I am confused as to where in the game does it says about Alpha, Beta, Delta, Sigma male or about Alpha and Sigma points?

 

[Skeltom]

I am confused as to where in the game does it says about Alpha, Beta, Delta, Sigma male or about Alpha and Sigma points?

It's in the code as points and a trait of the MC. The player doesn't see it as far as I know.

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[JohnF95zone]

It's in the code as points and a trait of the MC. The player doesn't see it as far as I know.

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I see. Interesting. Players are now scrutinizing the choice of variable name in the game code. Developers really need to step up their game, their sh*tty codes will be on trial sooner or later .

 

[dolfe67]

It's in the code as points and a trait of the MC. The player doesn't see it as far as I know.

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The Mc_Sigma and Mc_Alpha variables are not used, probably a duplicate not removed.

 

[Skeltom]

The Mc_Sigma and Mc_Alpha variables are not used, probably a duplicate not removed.

I see that now. It still uses the "M" variable of the two at any rate. I'm not sure if they plan on implementing them later or like you said, just left over code. I've been seeing a lot of games lately with unused variables.

 

[TheGreys]

The points that will really change the characteristic are the Sigma and Alpha points. Not Sigma_M or Alpha_M.But yes, you are right. We haven't used it in the current version of the game. M = Mini

 

[JohnF95zone]

Initial feedbacks:

Stunning renders, visuals and animations.
A decent amount of contents for early versions (only at Episode 2).
Musics and sounds are ear friendly, nice to listen.
I still have not figured out completely regarding the choices player made and how it affects the point systems and/or path, but this will be more prevalent in later updates.

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[risky0]

on this forum there is a big difference in avoidable and skippable. avoidable is used when you can stop something from happening completely so if there was a way make it so the scene on the camera never actually happened what this seems to be is more skip able where it happened but you dont have to see it. Unless you are saying if you dont take the camera it means that what was on it never happened at all.

also whether she is a love interest or not will factor into how people view it as well if she is its enough for alot of people to ignore the game if not while they might not like the scene some might still play

It doesn't make sense for a prerecorded video to be avoidable.
This scene is considered skippable unless the developer explicitly states otherwise.

There is no appropriate tag for such scenes and it bothers me.

I don't know what other people will think of it but if she is a love interest it will definitely negatively affect my enjoyment of the game.

 

[goulet1995]

It doesn't make sense for a prerecorded video to be avoidable.
This scene is considered skippable unless the developer explicitly states otherwise.

There is no appropriate tag for such scenes and it bothers me.

I don't know what other people will think of it but if she is a love interest it will definitely negatively affect my enjoyment of the game.

its certainly a red flag and not the only one imo

 

[PaiLord]

Can anyone explain to me how the Alpha and Sigma stats affect the story?