Well, not 100% wrong, I just didn't complete the sentence correctly. I knew it didn't sound right, but without a bit of my fix, it would sound wrong by itself. You finished it nicely. I was just not thinking of it that way. I was trying to keep most of what was written down as to not change too much of it.
My point was that "going to go meet up", as you proposed, is redundant. Even the dev's "going to meet up" was better than that.
Have you forgotten where you are and what industry this is?
no and I still believe in my comment. Just cause it's an AVN I don't consider that porn or something that needs lewds necessarily. I think it strongly depends on the context of the game. A game that focuses on story or character development doesn't need them but it is strongly encouraged within this genre because it's the most common theme. With that being said they should only come when a developer thinks it's a good time and not feel forced , just case an AVN has lewds I don't consider it porn unless it's meant to feel more like a porn AVN rather than an Adult AVN context of the game matters. If this game was a porn AVN for example the story and character development would take a backseat and lewds would take priority. .
For me the narrative took me some time to get into and granted have to accept a lawyer doing non lawyer work. It was until the MC rescued the girl from that house when I got into the story. Can't speak about the quality of the writing or dialogue as the way I play I find personally hard to notice good vs bad writing most of the time. If I recall only 1 of the lewd scenes didn't feel random to me. Even then there is practically no build up as this game is lacking on character development to me.
I'm still waiting for this one to grab me. I really like the renders, and most of the girls are nice and desirable, but the story has yet to drag me in. I really want it to and haven't given up. Waiting on the next update to see whether it can pull me in.
yeah it's more story focused only a few sex scenes has made sense to me most feel like they are forced and there for no reason
if you mean in the story , I dont recall much but that I do recall is this. Your Boss and the 2 girls's father ( forget their names right now) got shot. The MC did have to make a big choice of trying to stop it from happening or something else I forget the 2nd choice.
The other choice was checking the younger sister was ok. I went the older sister one.
