VN Ren'Py The Grey Dream [v4.3 Steam] [TheGreys]

[Milton749]

Is it me or does the writing feel...incomplete?
I feel like I'm having a bad trip. Conversations end out of nowhere, random ass transitions that make no sense, abrupt/unnecessary sex scenes that add nothing to the plot and do nothing for you, the player.
The narrative takes some truly confusing turns that have had no build-up whatsoever, often leaving the readers guessing what's happening and who the MC is talking to.

But some of the best 3d models/renders I've ever seen though. Feels like they did the hard part right and then fumbled the ball when it came to the easier stuff.

For me the narrative took me some time to get into and granted have to accept a lawyer doing non lawyer work. It was until the MC rescued the girl from that house when I got into the story. Can't speak about the quality of the writing or dialogue as the way I play I find personally hard to notice good vs bad writing most of the time. If I recall only 1 of the lewd scenes didn't feel random to me. Even then there is practically no build up as this game is lacking on character development to me.

I'm still waiting for this one to grab me. I really like the renders, and most of the girls are nice and desirable, but the story has yet to drag me in. I really want it to and haven't given up. Waiting on the next update to see whether it can pull me in.

 

[DevinHesi]

Episode 5 - Status Update #5

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Hello there,

We're back with another status update, but this one will be short.

We've finished rendering 11 more animations and will start working on the next ones next week. For the static renders, 200+ have been rendered since the last status update and are still rendering as we write this.

Lastly, we mentioned that we would be adding some additional language options with the upcoming update. As of last week, Italian translation was added to those options.



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[Mr. Harper]

Episode 5 - Status Update #5

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Hello there,

We're back with another status update, but this one will be short.

We've finished rendering 11 more animations and will start working on the next ones next week. For the static renders, 200+ have been rendered since the last status update and are still rendering as we write this.

Lastly, we mentioned that we would be adding some additional language options with the upcoming update. As of last week, Italian translation was added to those options.



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The Greys

Haleyyyyyy

 

[DevinHesi]

Monthly Special Renders - Lily Specials

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[DevinHesi]

Monthly Special Renders - Kelly Specials

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[StrawberryCheese83]

ahhhh shit...these girls are sooooo fucking hot. Love this VN. Cant wait for the Update.

 

[theolin]

i came for the femdom content only to find that there is none...the renders are good but the game is boring and the text oh the text is a nightmare, finaly very less sex scenes this combo made me drop this game...a pity really...

 

[Dessolos]

i came for the femdom content only to find that there is none...the renders are good but the game is boring and the text oh the text is a nightmare, finaly very less sex scenes this combo made me drop this game...a pity really...

yeah it's more story focused only a few sex scenes has made sense to me most feel like they are forced and there for no reason

 

[DevinHesi]

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Monthly Special Renders - Haley Specials

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[Guz007]

Whats the last thing happened ?

 

[Dessolos]

Whats the last thing happened ?

if you mean in the story , I dont recall much but that I do recall is this. Your Boss and the 2 girls's father ( forget their names right now) got shot. The MC did have to make a big choice of trying to stop it from happening or something else I forget the 2nd choice.

 

[Milton749]

if you mean in the story , I dont recall much but that I do recall is this. Your Boss and the 2 girls's father ( forget their names right now) got shot. The MC did have to make a big choice of trying to stop it from happening or something else I forget the 2nd choice.

The other choice was checking the younger sister was ok. I went the older sister one.

 

[Dessolos]

The other choice was checking the younger sister was ok. I went the older sister one.

gotcha thanks yeah I think I made a save for both haha

 

[DevinHesi]

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Hello there,

This will be a sweet and short one. We're currently on the last day of the episode. There are some big scenes we have to tackle, but other than that, episode 5 is almost done. I'd give you an estimate of the renders, but we've lost track of them since we've done so many animations and renders, but without a doubt this is the biggest update we've worked on so far. Because of the size of episode 5, we might split the next episode into 2 parts for the next update, because this is getting mentally exhausting.



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