Really great first VN. Love the art, some of the best animations I've ever seen to be honest in this space.
My one gripe is the nature of the MC, the MC's form of objection to Neu's advances is seemingly just "because no". It paints the MC's personality as someone who wouldn't have walked into that room in the first place.
The MC could easily have rejected Neu, but still shown interest in her, which could have opened up deeper character interaction between the three, with the MC firm about what he wants but the girls having a minor spat of jealousy.
Actually one more problem, the MC has no depth at all. This VN would not have been much different with a silent protagonist.
My one gripe is the nature of the MC, the MC's form of objection to Neu's advances is seemingly just "because no". It paints the MC's personality as someone who wouldn't have walked into that room in the first place.
The MC could easily have rejected Neu, but still shown interest in her, which could have opened up deeper character interaction between the three, with the MC firm about what he wants but the girls having a minor spat of jealousy.
Actually one more problem, the MC has no depth at all. This VN would not have been much different with a silent protagonist.