- Nov 21, 2017
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Another interesting release worth stepping away from the lurk to comment. As far as game demos come this one certainly meets the definition of the better ones: it introduces the story and fundamental elements of the game, it is well written in proper English, has a diverse and interesting pool of characters and I for one found the pacing to be good for a first release. You get a glimpse of what is to come in the game with that first spanking in my opinion, in the sense that while your goal will ultimately be to corrupt the girls it will be something you have to work towards, going as far as doing side-quests to gain influence to change the rules as to not have your game be too easy or boring too quickly.
My suspension of disbelief was not entirely broken by the opening of the game because while the MC thinks what he is doing is nothing wrong the "realistic" (in the sense he was not immediately arrested lol) crowd reaction and subsequent development of the story made it acceptable enough that is not game-breaking unrealistic to me personally. Everyone seems to understand that while the rules of society have been changed something like this is not yet widely accepted and has to be done in seclusion, gets positive points from me there.
I also like how I can already see what kind of work I might have ahead of me in order to achieve the desired ultimate harem scenario, with the teachers side-quests, student interactions, limited action turns in the punishment as to figure out the best possible way to unlock the next level with the girls. It has overall good gameplay mechanics and while it is too early to judge if they seem like more boring grind like many other games I feel like they are well balanced enough as of right now (I do realize this is 0.1 the demo). It tickled my planning ahead/roadmap the shit out of stuff enjoyment I often get playing strategy games.
The Character pool and models are quite honestly very good indeed. I feel like there is something for everyone in here, from my personal favorites the little petites to more voluptuous girls that again, are not unrealistically balloon big (I get that some of you here like that and that's fine, it's just not my cup of tea). And even though my laser focus has already targeted Charlotte, Rachel and Maxine as primary targets the redhead twins are way too fucking hot to not fantasize about! As a side note is there any content involving Samantha, your PA? Her very friendly nature was very appealing to me. Chang also tickled my she's a little freaky but might be worth it tingle.
So overall i would say you have yourself quite a good opportunity in your hands to develop something good and concrete worthy of a Patreon campaign.
The positives for me are:
- Believable story, well within the limits of an erotic fantasy.
- Proper English, always gets good points from me when i can actually understand wtf is going on.
- Good Character Pool, with enough variety that should have something for everyone.
- Good Pacing, as of 0.1 in the sense that the candy isn't immediately handed out to you.
- Interesting Mechanics, the punishments, side quests, student interactions and opportunities to change your core values all play well with each other.
The only pet peeve I have is that I agree with another user that said that the MC looks too much like a soy boy imo. Could have gone with a more manly model but oh well.
This came out a lot more like a review than I expected... I might copy-paste myself to the review section... In fact i think I will.
My suspension of disbelief was not entirely broken by the opening of the game because while the MC thinks what he is doing is nothing wrong the "realistic" (in the sense he was not immediately arrested lol) crowd reaction and subsequent development of the story made it acceptable enough that is not game-breaking unrealistic to me personally. Everyone seems to understand that while the rules of society have been changed something like this is not yet widely accepted and has to be done in seclusion, gets positive points from me there.
I also like how I can already see what kind of work I might have ahead of me in order to achieve the desired ultimate harem scenario, with the teachers side-quests, student interactions, limited action turns in the punishment as to figure out the best possible way to unlock the next level with the girls. It has overall good gameplay mechanics and while it is too early to judge if they seem like more boring grind like many other games I feel like they are well balanced enough as of right now (I do realize this is 0.1 the demo). It tickled my planning ahead/roadmap the shit out of stuff enjoyment I often get playing strategy games.
The Character pool and models are quite honestly very good indeed. I feel like there is something for everyone in here, from my personal favorites the little petites to more voluptuous girls that again, are not unrealistically balloon big (I get that some of you here like that and that's fine, it's just not my cup of tea). And even though my laser focus has already targeted Charlotte, Rachel and Maxine as primary targets the redhead twins are way too fucking hot to not fantasize about! As a side note is there any content involving Samantha, your PA? Her very friendly nature was very appealing to me. Chang also tickled my she's a little freaky but might be worth it tingle.
So overall i would say you have yourself quite a good opportunity in your hands to develop something good and concrete worthy of a Patreon campaign.
The positives for me are:
- Believable story, well within the limits of an erotic fantasy.
- Proper English, always gets good points from me when i can actually understand wtf is going on.
- Good Character Pool, with enough variety that should have something for everyone.
- Good Pacing, as of 0.1 in the sense that the candy isn't immediately handed out to you.
- Interesting Mechanics, the punishments, side quests, student interactions and opportunities to change your core values all play well with each other.
The only pet peeve I have is that I agree with another user that said that the MC looks too much like a soy boy imo. Could have gone with a more manly model but oh well.
This came out a lot more like a review than I expected... I might copy-paste myself to the review section... In fact i think I will.
