Cartageno

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Had the same problem a few years ago with a story I was writing, it's hard to get that rhythm and rhyme to stop forming.
I know that feeling. Sometimes a sentence forms in your head with a perfect metric pattern and suddenly you start rhyming on it or similar. Like an earworm. Only you cannot make it go away by listening to the song, since there is no song.
 
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TheDevian

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I know that feeling. Sometimes a sentence forms in your head with a perfect metric pattern and suddenly you start rhyming on it or similar. Like an earworm. Only you cannot make it go away by listening to the song, since there is no song.
Sometimes I get that way with alliteration as well.

Twas the night before x-ams, when all through the dorm,
The girls were all watching, some girl on girl porn.
In walked the HM so lively and quick.
Most girls were quite happy to see his big dick.

Their faces were covered with spooge as he came,
He stroked his big cock as he called them by name.
It's on Donna, on Debby, on Alice and Priti...
On Amy, on Rachel, on Charlotte, and Lucy.

But do you recall?
The sexiest student of all?

'Lizbeth the brown haired streaker...
Had a very nice body,
And if you ever saw it.
It would make her feel horny.

All of the other students,
Looked at her and called her strange,
They didn't want to join her,
In any of her naked games...

Then one lovely school morning,
HM came to say,
Students, your behavior's bad,
Remove your clothes or make me mad!

Then all the students joined her,
As she practiced nudity,
'Lizbeth the brown haired streaker...
One day you'll go down on me!

 

Cartageno

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Whenever I do feel the need
to rhyme, or factually indeed
use an alliterative word,
no matter who deems it absurd,

I check whether I hit my head
on stone or on some wooden frame.
Because I rather would be dead
than have to live in rhyming shame.
 

Cartageno

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Well, as Altos, Devian, and me mentioned before, once the rhyming gets you you may go crazy. This might have gotten a bit out of hand, so I'll spoiler it. Only look if you can survive bad poetry.

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Wine on Linux: Game keeps crashing (memory error) when you masturbate Liz with the vibrator in class. You have to skip through the scene to pass it.
 

Cartageno

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Great ode.

Apart from that

It seems that I forgot poor Alice,
but believe me when I say
that it was not done out of malice.
Also with her I'll sleep some day.
 
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somedude0190

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Hello first time posting in this thread so I hope I don't come off as one of those guys when I ask this, but is there any idea when the next update is. I know I know there was an update fairly recently and from what I can understand (there was a ton of post and search function isn't amazing) there was a big gap between the last main update, so the reason I ask is should I be thinking it might be a month or two away or should I not get my hopes up for anything other then like around 10 months. The art style is really good and I am really enjoying the story (just started on chapter 2 so not sure how much more I still have to cover but I play like 4 hours a day so I am afraid I will cover it all fast). There is so much I am curious about and I wonder what all can be added. I really want more of priti and at the same time I don't. I don't like the idea of her being punished but she is such a likeable character that I would love to get more story with her. I am curious where things will go with Debbie. I could go on and on about the stuff I would like to see later but this post is already longer then I would like. I do realize that any date set would be arbitrary at best because unless this is the devs only job real life is more important and this could get put on the back burner. I guess I was just hoping to get like an idea of what I might be looking at for wait time and what might get put in next time.

TLDR: I was curious when the next update might be and what might be in it (I apologize if this has been asked a thousand times but search function sucks or at least I suck at using it at least)
 

AltosandHerdone

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Hello first time posting in this thread so I hope I don't come off as one of those guys when I ask this, but is there any idea when the next update is. I know I know there was an update fairly recently and from what I can understand (there was a ton of post and search function isn't amazing) there was a big gap between the last main update, so the reason I ask is should I be thinking it might be a month or two away or should I not get my hopes up for anything other then like around 10 months. The art style is really good and I am really enjoying the story (just started on chapter 2 so not sure how much more I still have to cover but I play like 4 hours a day so I am afraid I will cover it all fast). There is so much I am curious about and I wonder what all can be added. I really want more of priti and at the same time I don't. I don't like the idea of her being punished but she is such a likeable character that I would love to get more story with her. I am curious where things will go with Debbie. I could go on and on about the stuff I would like to see later but this post is already longer then I would like. I do realize that any date set would be arbitrary at best because unless this is the devs only job real life is more important and this could get put on the back burner. I guess I was just hoping to get like an idea of what I might be looking at for wait time and what might get put in next time.

TLDR: I was curious when the next update might be and what might be in it (I apologize if this has been asked a thousand times but search function sucks or at least I suck at using it at least)
Making the game has been my day job (and only job) for a while. Length between updates depends on a lot of factors. It was longer last time (5 months) for a number of reasons, including having to do a lot of writing and planning for Chapter 2 and updating the UI and parts of the code. Usually it’s about two to three months between updates. My best guess for the next one is late February / early March. Its very difficult to say exactly as it’s a creative project much more than a technical one.
With Priti, you will be given the option to level her up without punishing her, if you just got to Chapter 2 you’ll find that out soon. Might be a while before we get far into her storyline though. I need to finish setting up Chapter 2, then there will be a poll of Patreons to determine the order that the new batch of girls will get their storylines fleshed out.
 

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then there will be a poll of Patreons to determine the order that the new batch of girls will get their storylines fleshed out.
Let me save you the time... Priti is winning that poll, The twins will make second place by a small margin, then Liz will be a non so distant third and then it's officially a toss up... I'm gonna guess Faye is fourth and Alice bottom.

NOT my preferences, just projecting.
 
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