This is looking pretty darn good! Interesting story, unique and varied characters, high quality CG and even music... very well done for a first release
I think this is definetly a project I would like to back. Fetish porn + management is always a great combination!
However I do have one particular criticism for this realease...
Anticipation, suspense, imagiantion... All of these are quite signifigant factors when it comes to arousal and eroticism and with that in mind I think it was a poor choice to show so many of the students nude/topless this early on in the game. The girls in question have now handed over a part of what makes up their character at the start of the game and the anticipation and mystery of their nudity can never be used as motivation again for the player. Another point of view is why would someone go to the effort of different body proportions, nipple/aereola sizes/color, pubic hair styles, underwear differences etc... if all of those interesting and erotic details are handed over to the player so quickly for minimal effort?
I do wish more developers would think carefully about what they reveal and when they reveal it, espeacially when a competent story line is part of the experience. The only redeeming factor I can see here for me personally is if they introduce new students down the line to add more variety and appeal, mystery and anticipation as the player progresses. Also I do understand that the game needs something resembling porn in it at first to pull in the punters... but I think you went a little overboard considering this game clealry has a high level of character focus and it'd probably be quite easy to get invested in the students.
I do look forward to your next release, however. Keep up the good work!