- Feb 12, 2021
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I believe MC mentioned interacting with Lucy or Priti after they graduate? I know its important to develop the next girl, or continue the school plot, but I think the writers should start briefly touching on, or foreshadowing, what they plan for each girl after the graduation, perhaps with short plot events. If Rachel, Priti, Lucy or others want to remain with the MC, then a little writing needs to be spent on their feelings and plans. That doesn't necessarily require any animations or sexy time.
Harem Hotel did 'dates' which I think was a big failure. I don't want to know the idle preferences of a person who doesn't exist, I just want to see them progress a bit, especially in relation to the MC.
It seems that after they graduate from this very special school, they will have aptitudes that give them special opportunities with the rich sponsors of the school. . . .
I agree that the long drawn out dates in Harem Hotel don't work, especially with all the sob stories that the girls tell on the dates . . . not fun, not comical . . . whereas The Headmaster always has a light and comical touch!