Current:
The radiation from an asteroid collision with Earth years ago gave rise to strange human powers.
Superpowers, indeed...
People abusing their powers for selfish gain caused the society to experience a serious crisis at that point. Chaos all around.
At that point, the Hero society was established. They took action, passed new rules, and their leader employed force to suppress the commoners' abilities.
However, some people with unique abilities or more aura than others, such as my parents, did not lose their abilities, which is why I am here for an interview to join the Hero Society.
What I would change to:
Years ago a meteor shower across the globe took place what the media called a once-in-a-lifetime event. Yet this beautiful event took a rather unexpected turn when meteorites landed across all the continents which blanked areas across each continent with a new type of radiation.
This radiation created untold chaos all around the globe and society had a crisis unlike any other before. People started to develop powers that they could only dream of before and this event is what caused people to have superpowers.
With the world's society on the brink of collapse a new group was formed, Hero Society, with the goal to combat the raise of the supervillains with this Hero Society new laws were passed across the world to help suppress anyone they deemed fit from villains to what they deemed commoners.
However, some people who have unique abilities or more aura than others, such as my parents, did not lose their abilities, which is why I am here for an interview to join the Hero Society.
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During the power pick:
I got Psychic Powers, the Ability to read people's minds, predict the future, and talk to the dead... But I lack training and can only read some minds.
Would change to:
I have Psychic Powers, I am told that with the right training, I can do a lot of things which range from predicting the future, talking with the dead, and reading people's thoughts. Right now I can only read people's thoughts and it's still not super clear when I do.
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So I can examine you precisely, and make notes for your radiation level, and in case you go rogue we have every minute detail of you to stop you lol.
Would remove lol.
Would change more to:
Everyone needs to have a detailed medical scanning and also take note of their current radiation level. We also take precautions if anyone joins but goes rogue.
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Hmm. Lem me get some photos, they are necessary to put in our record. And also remove the underwear.
Would change to:
We also need to take photos for the record so remove the underwear as well.
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Also small bug:
Mr. $name. is used and not the name.