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To me girl on girl lesbo stuff isnt NTR. To me NTR is a guy seeing his girl get taken by another guys dick. But thanks for the warning in the genre tags in the first page.
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God damn, the dialogue is fucking atrocious.
There are few things as facepalm inducing as watching two gormless fuckwits have a conversations about a uber secret society in a crowded coffee shop or in a public park, where both continuously name drop the name or the initialism of said secret society with every other line of dialogue.
Is the author dense? Are the characters stupid? Is the writer assuming their audience is nothing but morons? Why can these two characters not have an extended conversations about the secret society that they are both members of, without needing to incessantly name drop it? Are we really so fucking afraid that the characters or the audience will forget what is being discusses if 'THS' does not get spoken out loud every other sentence? Jesus fucking Christ...
There are few things as facepalm inducing as watching two gormless fuckwits have a conversations about a uber secret society in a crowded coffee shop or in a public park, where both continuously name drop the name or the initialism of said secret society with every other line of dialogue.
Is the author dense? Are the characters stupid? Is the writer assuming their audience is nothing but morons? Why can these two characters not have an extended conversations about the secret society that they are both members of, without needing to incessantly name drop it? Are we really so fucking afraid that the characters or the audience will forget what is being discusses if 'THS' does not get spoken out loud every other sentence? Jesus fucking Christ...
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It's fantasy my friend it's not the real world also from what i saw if i understand correctly the scene you are talking about , the coffee shop has no other customers at that specific moment so there is no audience.
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Nope. The first talk with MrQ? You see people in the shop beforehand. Also, who would take care of your order in an empty coffeeshop anyways? Even if it were empty, name dropping THS every other sentence like they'd otherwise forget WHICH specific secret society they're currently talking about makes them both sounds like complete morons. The dialogue is bad. MrQ even uses 'They're there' in a sentence during that meeting. It makes sense when you read it, but would be confusing as hell if you said that out loud (you would say 'they are there' to avoid confusion). Nobody would talk like that, and if they did, you'd get the impression that they were stupid (and certainly not erudite or in a position of authority). So again, the dialogue in general is bad. Whoever wrote it clearly didn't take a second to even read it out loud themselves.
So far, things aren't looking good for Violet. MC's best friend directly wrote that she was deceiving him. Most likely, her deception will be related to her current absence “for work.” As a result, this will lead to a conflict from which there will be 2 ways out.Well, that was a good update xxerikxx
Judging by the fact that Mc is seeing strange dreams, it seems the story is going to the point that he will end up with Angelina or Angelina and Mila... but the secret with Violet really bothers me, I hope not to spoil it, I really like her! In general, I’m looking forward to further developments.
1 - Violet will be completely removed from the main story, since Angelina will take the side of MC and Violet will not be able to remain in the foreground.
2 - Violet will completely change her role. In other words, it will no longer be the same character that you liked initially.
In my opinion, it's better to have the first option than to watch Violet suddenly change and accept/encourage or even participate in Angelina's sex life with MC... It's just a downfall of the character. It's better to leave.
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I partially agree with your proposal... but there is a suspicion that Violet is somehow connected with THS and she worked there undercover or worked there because... well, it’s difficult to explain this... that this should happen what according to Mc's friend is she deceiving him? is this really that scary? I would really be sorry if Violet betrays Mc because I like her as a character and her attitude towards her husband, especially the hot scenes... I still hope she is still working undercover and then she finds out that Mc brought her daughter to THS and then there will be a serious showdown between husband and wife...
I think she wanted Mc to not know where she works for his safety and the safety of her daughters... somehow it’s not pleasant to see Violet’s character being spoiled and she even went against her daughter? ? there is something wrong there... and yes, I think judging by Mc Angelina's dream, Mc's true love will be like her friend and another girl... I think something will happen to Violet saving the family and Mc will suffer greatly on her...
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Mag...Violet is already fully aware that Angelina is/has joined THS. Explained in the story.I partially agree with your proposal... but there is a suspicion that Violet is somehow connected with THS and she worked there undercover or worked there because... well, it’s difficult to explain this... that this should happen what according to Mc's friend is she deceiving him? is this really that scary? I would really be sorry if Violet betrays Mc because I like her as a character and her attitude towards her husband, especially the hot scenes... I still hope she is still working undercover and then she finds out that Mc brought her daughter to THS and then there will be a serious showdown between husband and wife...
I think she wanted Mc to not know where she works for his safety and the safety of her daughters... somehow it’s not pleasant to see Violet’s character being spoiled and she even went against her daughter? ? there is something wrong there... and yes, I think judging by Mc Angelina's dream, Mc's true love will be like her friend and another girl... I think something will happen to Violet saving the family and Mc will suffer greatly on her...
However, for potential spoilers, you could always take a peek at the text version of THS...
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Unfortunately, I didn’t play the text version because the game was not translated into my language...
Based on the fact that Violet was notified about her daughter joining THS, it was expected even in the main version... the question is what will happen next and what reaction is expected next... for some reason I think that Violet is really working as someone undercover ?
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I've not either but I know some of what happens in that version.Unfortunately, I didn’t play the text version because the game was not translated into my language...
Based on the fact that Violet was notified about her daughter joining THS, it was expected even in the main version... the question is what will happen next and what reaction is expected next... for some reason I think that Violet is really working as someone undercover ?
As for Voilet...I don't even think it's anything to do with THS. I've said before, what would actually cause the MC's best friend to actually do what he did/go the lengths he did? Has to be something pretty big and serious to my mind. Even something like porn..well ok, so what, she did porn when she was younger. Hardly end of the world/earth shattering stuff etc etc. So she was a member of a secret society? Again, hardly worth getting excitable or upset over...
So it has to be something...something...I dunno heh...but you get what I'm saying right....
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Yeah, I understand what you mean... the fact that Violet starred in porn is known even to Mc himself, and Mc himself is also probably different from Violet, perhaps he was a sex symbol in the past, so I don’t think that this is something shocking.. .. but as you said, this must be something serious, since Vaolet is hiding something from her husband... but to completely ruin the character would be a blow... it’s unlikely that she’s so downright bad, especially since she has a daughter... there must still be something
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Maybe violet hasn't and still isn't being faithful to the mc and is part of another group that is sorta similar to ths having masters and slaves that get the same sorta sexual training etc. and she got sent to gather some sort of information on the mc and when she finds out mc joins ths they have her report back in person for privacy to collect the information then they use other blackmail information they collected to have mc do their bidding as a double agent to gather information for them also.
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This doesn't explain anything... because if this is what you said, then she is putting her daughter in danger... if her goal was to find information on Mc, does it make sense to leave her daughter alone with the person she is looking for information? I’m not sure... so it’s unlikely, but she’s working for someone, that’s for sure, but it’s not a fact that she’s working against Mc, perhaps initially there was an idea to find information through Mc, but to work as a slave and look for information through her husband looks like too much of a betrayal... as said Maviarab there is something more than just a game... I have hope that she hid everything for the safety of her husband and daughter
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Could be if she is working for a group like the ths they are smart and know that doing any harm to someone or do anything dangerous could jeopardize violets mission and also mc would be less likely to cooperate/go to ths for help, and they don't want that heat brought to them and just remain in the shadows like they have been so far.
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I have to ask, in this theroy of yours, why on earth whould this other random secret society be interested in a second-rate average actor? Bearing in mind he only been a member of THS himself for a short time (so a long time after Violet apparently 18 or so years ago joined a random secret society to get info on a struggling actor she's just met?).
I'm curious lol.
Violet and MC met LONG before he even heard vague rumors of THS.
I don’t remember exactly, but in my opinion at that moment MS wasn’t even a star movie. It was only then that he began his foundation.
in other words he was NOBODY. There was no point in rebuilding all these complex circuits.
I haven't read the text version, so I can only guess. If the situation exists in Violet's secret society, another situation is possible. She was the organization of the "property" of this. Then she became pregnant. Perhaps she ran away to save the child. Although getting involved with an actor who is gaining popularity while you are on the run is, of course, a big mistake. And now they found her. It was no longer possible to escape again, and she returned to the “farm”. In this case, she will also be lost for the plot, since if you introduce a line with her release, then an unnecessary confrontation with the secret society will take the story completely in the wrong direction.
I don’t remember exactly, but in my opinion at that moment MS wasn’t even a star movie. It was only then that he began his foundation.
in other words he was NOBODY. There was no point in rebuilding all these complex circuits.
I haven't read the text version, so I can only guess. If the situation exists in Violet's secret society, another situation is possible. She was the organization of the "property" of this. Then she became pregnant. Perhaps she ran away to save the child. Although getting involved with an actor who is gaining popularity while you are on the run is, of course, a big mistake. And now they found her. It was no longer possible to escape again, and she returned to the “farm”. In this case, she will also be lost for the plot, since if you introduce a line with her release, then an unnecessary confrontation with the secret society will take the story completely in the wrong direction.
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Dunno might be anything from maybe mc had a rich family member in the past that was part of them mc doesn't know about, and they had some form of high position, and they took interest in mc in some form based off that, and they wanted the mc to join them so they sent in violet to work with and find out if he had what it takes to join hence wanting information about him and then when he found out about and then joined ths it made things a bit complicated for them as they wanted him. Or another maybe is they took interested in the mc when mila's dad started to snoop on who violet was and when they looked into him, the information on the mc and thought the mc in some way had something that would benefit them in some way such as oh he is an actor in a way maybe we can get him on our side, and he will be our new recruiter etc. so we get more members and girls to join after they send in a recruiter like mr. q is for example to get things rolling.
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