Filipis

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What is the point of this game? The dev just keeps adding random-ass endings to every choice we make. There's no story to be told here, just a wife wanting strange cock and a husband that either goes along with it, or doesn't. IIRC there's literally only choice left that's unfinished - and that's it?
 
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longjohngold

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I thought this was pretty good. I liked how much the dude haaated what was going on. The bit where the other woman was blowing him and he'd not even get hard as he watched his wife with the guy was spot on. The wife isn't attractive, but maybe that's part of the reason she seems to need this validation so much.

That said the jump was bad. It should continue on more of that night where the wife gets DPed. Not just jump to ages later (where I guess further content will continue on from later). I think it was a little rushed there too, the wife should continue being manipulative and the other guy shouldn't just straight up tell the MC he's lost her straight away like that. Draw it out for longer, as the MC is too deep to back out. The other girl is key, I liked how she was kinda kicking things off - trying to get the MC going, fingering the wife's ass to lube her up, etc.
 

holy8675

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I thought this was pretty good. I liked how much the dude haaated what was going on. The bit where the other woman was blowing him and he'd not even get hard as he watched his wife with the guy was spot on. The wife isn't attractive, but maybe that's part of the reason she seems to need this validation so much.

That said the jump was bad. It should continue on more of that night where the wife gets DPed. Not just jump to ages later (where I guess further content will continue on from later). I think it was a little rushed there too, the wife should continue being manipulative and the other guy shouldn't just straight up tell the MC he's lost her straight away like that. Draw it out for longer, as the MC is too deep to back out. The other girl is key, I liked how she was kinda kicking things off - trying to get the MC going, fingering the wife's ass to lube her up, etc.


Now that you said ‘the other girl is key,’ I realized you’re 100% right. She could take this story in so many directions.


She could be the sudden holiday friend who slowly corrupts things. She could be subtly talking down to the main character, not in an obvious way. It could even be that they were targeting the wife from the very beginning, but needed to peel the husband away first. Almost like taking the relationship apart piece by piece to find the weak point in its defenses.


Anyway, I went a bit far, but the point is, you’re right. She could be absolutely key to the plot, in both good and bad ways...
 
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Back in the day, I read an experience on a forum, either a true story or a made-up one. A couple went to a swinger party, or maybe just a regular party; I’m not entirely sure. There, they met another couple.


The women ended up talking in the bathroom about all sorts of things. At one point, the newly met friend asked if she found her partner attractive. She said yes, but added, ‘You know, I’m not alone here…’


‘Don’t worry about that, I’ll take care of him,’ the other woman said with a wink.


Later, they all went up to a hotel room. The wife and the other couple’s man went into the bedroom for some private time, while the husband stayed outside with the woman. They talked because she said she needed to loosen him up. She offered to make drinks, then noticed she had run out of ice. She excused herself and went into the corridor to get some.


Meanwhile, the husband could hear the other man with his wife. Twenty or thirty minutes later, the woman returned, apologizing and saying she had run into a friend in the hallway. Eventually, things wrapped up in the room, and the husband quickly left with his wife.


Later, he told her how horrible the experience had been for him, how he felt tortured and left out. As the wife thought back on what had happened, she realized something unsettling: when the woman said she would ‘take care of him,’ she hadn’t meant intimacy at all. She meant distracting him, keeping him occupied, and making sure he wouldn’t interfere.


In that moment, ‘taking care’ turned out to mean two very different things.
 
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