my game gets stuck when bob went for the cold drinks on the beach, any idea what's wrong?
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Mate, the thing is not about "being talentless" or not.
The main criticism that I give towards 9 out of 10 titles is bad/unrealistic writing unless it's something like Power Vacuum, where the game laughs off the tropes and cliches.
I try my best to give fair criticism to titles, not scream about milking or "WHY NTR/WHEN char A will get fked".
Just hope that you'll use it for future games, if you'll make ones. Cuz...feedback, you know.
1) Lack of build-up. 2 scenes deep and you already have someone's buttcheeks groped. I don't need the action to be dragged out as in some of the legendary titles in here(like AWAM), but c'mon. Give us some inner doubts and slow progression from "NO FUCKING WAY I'M LETTING YOU TOUCH ME" to "The guy is not that bad, actually. And handsome. My moron superhusband can't give to me because he's tired blababla" to "I don't know...Maybe I want the guy to touch me?"
2) Blackmail trope. That's just me, probably. But it's been so overused that it's annoying. "Suck me off or your hubby won't be able to fight 2 goons on the street". Lust/romance steal > Blackmail.
3) RPGM sux. Like, really. This may help to make a game seem longer, but eventually, Ren'Py is the best choice.
4) Choices, choices, choices. What a lot of games of this particular subgenre mess up with, is giving a player a choice. There are some in here, though. Just for the future: put yourself into a shoes of generic fatso jerking himself off between eating chips and drinking Pepsi. He may like one fetish, but wouldn't like another. He likes Raceplay trope, but doesn't like Nerds. Give him a choice who the girl gets to sleep with! Maybe obvious ones, maybe nah. Or your basic point system. Points system rule.
And the last one. Writing. The biggest hits show, that people get hooked to visual stuff+idea, but the main reason why they stay is story. Why Lust Of Pain has 30 pages of comments in here and makes 700$ per month while having good renders while Being A DIK is top-5 ever? Story.
Overall: your game - your way to make it. Just my 5 cents, since the idea with Elastica cheating may not be new, but it is a guaranteed hit, if implemented in proper way, imo.
people where to download this game with mods for the gallery? Is there such a version of the game with these mods? in the game it looks like puppies, but you can save as much as 24 ,, I think it’s still not enough to save all the puppies, have they developed?
- Jun 10, 2020
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What you write is senseless and even more so in this environment where there is not a single project with a minimum of realism, so, from my point of view, from the way you express yourself it doesn't even make sense for you to continue to frequent this forum.
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Oh really? Not a single project with realistic behaviour from it's characters? Not even one? COBD doesn't exist, I guess) EvaKiss' job with Our Red String doesn't count aswell) JOHN, as lazy as it's dev is, doesn't count too?
I'll tell you what is senseless - telling someone to get off the forums based on one interaction and putting ALL THE PROJECTS into the category of "not believable" character behaviour)
But if "OHMAGAD, I've just met him, but this guy has such a dong, can't wait to play with his oompa-loompa" gets you off - good for you. Have fun.
There you go! I'm glad you shared your thoughts.
1) I agree that events are moving too fast, which looks unrealistic and stupid, but developing events more smoothly is too time-consuming. I don't want to hold up production for too long.
2) What is, is. Blackmail is one of the most unrealistic scenarios, but considering that this is a parody of a cartoon, I think it's okay.
3) This is the first and last project on this engine.
4) To implement the choice, I need a more complex scenario with various events and consequences of the choice. But again, it all depends on the amount and length of the work (and my skills, which are not very good at the moment).
Even though I'm writing "It will take a long time," I'm not sure if I could do it.
I liked the phrase that was written to me that porn games are primarily art, and only then porn, but I would not classify this work as art))
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Как проба пера - норм, но со вторым условным проектом такое уже не прокатит, сам понимаешь.
More or less, as someone who's in the middle of making my own first game, cheering for your success(but with different title and more thought-through stuff), mate. Good luck.
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Right, "the game is what it is" but, in my opinion, despite the "banal" story, the linear gameplay if we compare it with what runs in this environment is a more than acceptable project.
Then considering that it is your first project as well as (at least until now) the commitment and continuity of development, for me, it is worth following it.
I hope that you will be able to acquire the skills necessary to make the art and animations at the level of the best 3D or 2D developers orbiting the sector.
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At least that's how it is until now, you can check it in the OP, from November to April 5 updates.
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I think the game is great. Usually those people who criticise it won't support you anyway. Best to just ignore them.