Likes: direction the story is going in
Dislikes: female models, heavy story chunks
So, I just want it noted that I'm not trying to spit on your work here. I haven't got the first idea how hard it is to make games or if i'm speaking for more people than myself when I write this, but those text walls gave me a headache. 9 times out of 10, I bailed halfway through, hit the skip button and wheeled back on the next choice so I could read the last few lines and make an educated guess. Even the introduction of the family and friends was hard to slug through. Still don't get whether the family is close or whether he was a good father or not.
Comments about the models have already been made, so I won't be mentioning them.
All that said, I'll be keeping an eye out for updates, because I like how this story is shaping up. Mafia family? Demon worship? Aliens? All of the above? The mystery will keep me coming back.