Ok, where do I start
The graphic, the UI, the story, the writing, the characters, the memes, the references, the easter eggs
I can tell you put your heart and soul into it and it's really showing.
- The graphic is amazing, probably the best HS game so far and you definitely know how work the light and the effects right.
- The UI is clean, simple and not just another default renpy one.
- The story is good, believable and have some originality into plus i likes the romance in it, but as for the "lore/twist/plot" I always say (don't go to a strip club expecting people to listen to you sing) it's a porn game, not a lot of people interested in that but I somehow trust you well pull a good one without jamming it to much in my face or make me read 30 lines of text about something I don't care about (aka waifu academy)
- The writing is really good, funny and I didn't feel like a horny 9 years old is trying to write a VN. The "long" narration didn't bother me at all and it was fun to read.
- the characters are nice. The reactions, poses and "animations" are really good and lively pulse the pinups was high quality even tho the NSFW pics spoiled seeing there naked body for the first time
- the memes and the references are just fantastic, I wont talk about them to not spoil the fun but I have to say that I didn't laugh that much on an hgame before.
Overall that was a blast to play and really enjoyed it, waiting for more updates and since you're plan on adding some other elements (Free Roam, Hotel Management, etc) I thick you might end up on the popular game soon.
Sorry for the long review. Anyway great moves, keep it up, proud of you!