Thank you for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed the game.
I agree that the begining of the game is not "optimal" and not really thought through.
I'm not messing around with it tho. Chapter 1 is finished and Chapter 2 is going to be a standalone game, so there really is no reason for me to go back and remake it.
That's not saying your idea isn't good, it is, a lot better actually, and I should have done that instead way back then.
But right now it would be pretty much pointless.
The jokes are, indeed, dated sometimes, but hey, stale memes and moronic jokes are what I do best!
The girls orgasm is something I'll consider going forward, as it's a pretty good sugestion of improvement, thanks!
That NTR joke at the begining was one of the best things I came up with, and I'm not changing anything on it. It helps set the tone of the game right from the start (if the disclaimer wasn't enough) and I still get some very good laughs everytime an unaware coomer gets mad over it.
As for the metal music, I'll have to check it later, I'm pretty sure I set it to play on a very low volume.
Overall, thanks for your constructive feedback, I hope you continue to enjoy the game going forward!
It's just minor dialogue changes to give some kind of foreshadowing early on.