I started new game and encountered no errors (I didn't have any of these later fixes), but I found one typo though.
"That won't be too dificult...
should be difficult.
It was nice to see MC's family life. Nice personalities, especially other sister was just my kind of nerd, but sadly, none of them were sexy. I was hoping that characters would have been improved a bit during this long redoing period. Mother had perhaps ugliest breasts I've ever seen in these kind of games, cute face though. Muscle sister, not too bad, but I don't have fetish for muscles and other sister would have been better if she would have been "normally fat" but her body proportions were just unnatural looking (like her mother's too).
During prologue characters seemed too clearly to be cut-pasted into background. Layout just didn't look natural. But that problem disappeared later on. What's the program used for making graphics? Faces looked pretty bad at times. Below average Honey Select level.
And like some others said, that Writer dude appearing from time to time was an bad idea. More irritating than humorous.
But despite critique, please continue making the game. What's I'm after mostly, is story, and you don't have problems with that. New phone looked nice, but I'd preferably seen that workload used on making it would have been used on progressing story. If some characters are too ugly I'll just skip sexual encounters with them (or I'll watch them without enjoying them).
