First - let us name the MC ... to read MC is annoying as fuck - and will be even worse later on. Will no one call us by a name in the game? ... Its even worse than a set name.
"Sweet" is not the first word that is coming to my mind ... maybe "forced"? ^^
A sweet smile should never show that much teeth.
Oh see ... that's another word for it
... Yeah I know you have to limit renders sometimes, but then just render her face and replace that or something like that. Using the exact same render and using it in completely different ways ... nope.
Then when the wife walks over, we dont see that, but the "blonde" (pink/purple hair) teleports from the bar to a table and summons a black dude ...
In general a lot of the facial expressions of the wife are quite creepy ...
The font is strange ... maybe because it is bold. I find it hard to read.
I think a sans-serif font font works better ...
It is an intro at best, nothing more ... hard to tell.
As said, the expressions are a bit strange at times and the story ... the idea is not bad, but I think the wife is playing the MC.
She has clearly a history with Kat and had meetings with her - so she cheated on the MC .. it is a bit strange that this is not mentioned at all - or is the MC that blood drained because he is so horny?
When this is the planned sizes of future updates, I will look into it after 5+ updates. I say that all the time ... start big and deliver a substantial start, because it is the only time when you have no time constraints and are not forced to deliver an update in a set interval.