- Aug 23, 2020
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So just got a chance to play and, overall, I think this is a strong product. Obviously, based on what I see at the website, assets and animations are the strong suit.
The thing that takes me out of games though is structural or logical gaps in the story. While I don't expect my porn games to be Citizen Kane, I also don't want to be left confused because of awkward or illogical story structure. Case in point- when Bi gets fingered before the shoot begins, it's very unclear if Angela is aware of what's happening. Logically it makes sense that Angela has to see what's going on since it's a small room, but since we never see her and she isn't directly addressed, it makes the whole thing weird. Later in the game Angela does comment something like "I need to talk to Bi about what happened before the shoot." but that seems way too understated for what just happened. If Angela was able to see what was happening while Bi was fingered, then we should have seen her immediate reaction. And if her reaction was negative, then we need a stronger explanation as to why she didn't run out immediately because "doing it for my friend" isn't a strong enough reason in my opinion.
The other example was at the very end when Jason is fooling around with Bi while behind the door. The scene itself is hot, but once again Angela is missing in action. The excuse is that Jason asked her to pick out a new outfit, but again...the room is small, she isn't that far away. It feels like if Angela isn't directly on screen then she doesn't exist. It would have been great to see her reacting to Jason's actions before telling Bi that they need to leave. (As an aside, Angela telling Bi it was time to go was confusing because I thought she was picking out the next outfit. But then everyone acts like the shoot was finished anyway. So it wasn't clear to me if Angela was calling an end to things because of Jason's actions, or if the photoshoot was ending anyways and there was simply a mistake in the writing.)
Anyways, I could go on, but I don't want to sound like a sourpuss. If I think of this game as a demo then I think it's really strong. Clean up some of the issues with continuity and this is a game I would support on Patreon.
The thing that takes me out of games though is structural or logical gaps in the story. While I don't expect my porn games to be Citizen Kane, I also don't want to be left confused because of awkward or illogical story structure. Case in point- when Bi gets fingered before the shoot begins, it's very unclear if Angela is aware of what's happening. Logically it makes sense that Angela has to see what's going on since it's a small room, but since we never see her and she isn't directly addressed, it makes the whole thing weird. Later in the game Angela does comment something like "I need to talk to Bi about what happened before the shoot." but that seems way too understated for what just happened. If Angela was able to see what was happening while Bi was fingered, then we should have seen her immediate reaction. And if her reaction was negative, then we need a stronger explanation as to why she didn't run out immediately because "doing it for my friend" isn't a strong enough reason in my opinion.
The other example was at the very end when Jason is fooling around with Bi while behind the door. The scene itself is hot, but once again Angela is missing in action. The excuse is that Jason asked her to pick out a new outfit, but again...the room is small, she isn't that far away. It feels like if Angela isn't directly on screen then she doesn't exist. It would have been great to see her reacting to Jason's actions before telling Bi that they need to leave. (As an aside, Angela telling Bi it was time to go was confusing because I thought she was picking out the next outfit. But then everyone acts like the shoot was finished anyway. So it wasn't clear to me if Angela was calling an end to things because of Jason's actions, or if the photoshoot was ending anyways and there was simply a mistake in the writing.)
Anyways, I could go on, but I don't want to sound like a sourpuss. If I think of this game as a demo then I think it's really strong. Clean up some of the issues with continuity and this is a game I would support on Patreon.