- Jul 11, 2017
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I have to say I think the translation is better now, but it's still not perfect. There are some accidental typos, and some that I'm sure are simply because the translator isn't a native English speaker (e.g. taller vs. higher). However, the writing wasn't difficult to follow anymore, except perhaps the scene where the smaller sister explains about her family.
Speaking of translations, I'm pretty sure you meant to call this game "The Intoxicating Scent", not Flavor. But names are subjective anyway, and flavor works if taken archaically.
Speaking of translations, I'm pretty sure you meant to call this game "The Intoxicating Scent", not Flavor. But names are subjective anyway, and flavor works if taken archaically.