Pix works extremely hard on updating teh game, trust me i know. Best of it all is how freakishly high his render quality stays throughout it all and he sticks to his story which is going to shock us when it's finally clear to us all...
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Something from Katie and Nickola for ya'll...
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Thanks for the update!
In the scene 0029_110 on the last 3 lines roles have been switched, IMHO.
The script looks like this:
But it should look like this to make sense:
In the scene 0029_110 on the last 3 lines roles have been switched, IMHO.
The script looks like this:
Python:
scene 0029_110
b "…"
g "Are you sure you don't want to go? Family leisure and stuff."
g "I am."
b "Why didn't you come? They almost begged fot it."
g "I'll catch up later. I don't want to wait for them to get their stuff. I can talk to you, instead."
Python:
scene 0029_110
b "…"
g "Are you sure you don't want to go? Family leisure and stuff."
b "I am."
g "Why won't you go? They almost begged for it."
b "I'll catch up later. I don't want to wait for them to get their stuff. I can talk to you, instead."Yes thanks a lot!!! In the next update I will fix it!
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I've always liked Alice, she's actually an intriguing character, she seem to be more or less like MC is, similar past/upbringing in some ways, so they have things in common, and she's adorable, hahaFinally, there are more of us! My favorite character! Previously, almost no one loved her.
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as if your renders were not pretty good
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An update without sex scenes, risky move, @PixelsLab! Take care of that back hurts.
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I may have found a line with a word missing. After Maria tells Katie to go change her swimsuit, the MC says "Of course, I don't have kids, but something tells me that dressing a teenage girl in front of her peers is not a good idea." I think the word "down" is missing and it should be "dressing down a teenage girl".
- May 22, 2017
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Certainly not the first, but still quite rare and always nice to see.
Or "undressing" instead of "dressing". It's what I'd prefer.
I'm sure I noticed quite a few more little mistakes, but nothing major or awful.
My English just isn't good enough to play a proofreader here, so I didn't pay much attention to it.
Oh, and not to mention the obvious fact that I really like this game, as I've already said several times since the first version appeared here.
Yes you are right! She is a lot like MC!I've always liked Alice, she's actually an intriguing character, she seem to be more or less like MC is, similar past/upbringing in some ways, so they have things in common, and she's adorable, haha
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Thank! While you have to suffer without scenes, they have nowhere to insert.
Good! Glad you liked it!Yep, loved it!
If it's not difficult for you, you can write a complete sentence as you think is right? I just have terrible English and I'm afraid to spoil everything. Sorry if I ask too much...
- May 22, 2017
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Sure, I'll give it a try. If the result sounds awful to some native English speakers, then please correct me!
The original sentence is: "Of course, I don't have kids, but something tells me that dressing a teenage girl in front of her peers is not such a good idea."
I think the sentence is otherwise fine the way it is, just replace the word "dressing" with "undressing". And while undressing a teenage girl in front of her peers may rarely be a good idea, undressing her in front of her parent(s) is a far worse, I'm sure.
As far as my knowledge of the English language goes, peers in this sentence would meen companions or equals, certainly not noblemen
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But here one of her companions is also her parent, which makes the idea much worse and I think that maybe this is what you tried to say here?
So I would also replace "peers" with "parents". Maybe?
"Of course, I don't have kids, but something tells me that undressing a teenage girl in front of her parents is not such a good idea."