Got2BeKD
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- Apr 12, 2017
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I've made a rewritten version of Chapter 1. There have been many complaints about the quality of English, so I hope this helps some others enjoy this story more. I also added some background music and side images for characters because I find they make the story easier to follow and more enjoyable for me.
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- to download the file, and just copy the game folder over. It overwrites the script.rpy and the screens.rpy, so you may want to back those up first.Please feel free to post feedback, compliments and criticism are both welcome.