Very good update, story is getting really interesting.
But what happened to the MC/Katie bath encounter at the end of Chp. 1, did it get cut?
At the end of the first chapter, he simply left. In the second chapter, this is recalled several times. When Alice went to look for the balls, Katie says:
Katie - Alice! Do not leave me alone with this...
MC - What was that supposed to mean?
And if there was a scene in the bathroom then MC answers.
MC - After all, it's not me peeking on you in the bathroom.
If there was no scene, then there is another dialogue.
And during dinner, there is such a dialogue.
Maria - By the way ... "Why did not you come with us to the beach?"
Katie - Oh, that ...
Katie - My arm hurt.
MC - {i} Shit ... {i}
Katie - You know ... it hurt so much, I was even afraid that it was broken. So I had to take a raincheck.
MC - {i} You think you're being smart, huh? {I}
MC - But you still went to the bath, did not you? Saw a lot of things there ...
The scene in the bathroom is the consequence of choice. "Grab the hand" or "Dodge", when Katie tries to grab a flower.