VN Ren'Py The Island [v0.3.10] [MichaelFenix]

[BabooJ1]

This is what should be the opening of the next update. He wakes up, realises he is rich enough to rent out a whole resort and has immense power. Realises some random guy came into his room and banged his women. Gets receptionist fired, packs the bags of the two women who thought it was ok to do that in front of him, flings the bags at their feet and says goodluck with your life with the receptionist. Picks up some new women and the rest of the ladies quickly realise what will happen to them if they pull that crap. Game saved.

I doubt that will occur, but it is one way out of the quicksand that this story created. I quickly played this game, writing is not the best, pretty basic and the set ups are thrown together, I quickly started clicking through it and for me that is always a sign that it is below par.

But maybe this game is taking a turn to where the MC is submissive or enjoys his women being taken by random men, if that was the set up, then I guess nothing needs to change.

Good luck with changing the dev's mind on this...

As for the MC being a bitch boi then no thanks - MC looked like he had a back bone and knew what he wanted but sadly that didn't quite work out for him. Also I am sorry to say that I didn't give it a good rating due to this turn of events.

 

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Overview:
A visual novel where you are the Main Character, A wealthy business owner sailing the world on his luxury yacht in the not too distant future. Until one day a family secret comes out and your twin step-sisters come to live with you.​

Thread Updated: 2020-06-24
Release Date: 2020-03-09
Developer: Michael Fenix

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Censored: No
Version: 0.3
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux, Android
Language: English
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Running into an error on android version. When it gets to this screen, the game locks up the phone. I have a Samsung note 10+ if that helps. Really enjoying the game up till then.

 

[dtk]

Running into an error on android version. When it gets to this screen, the game locks up the phone. I have a Samsung note 10+ if that helps. Really enjoying the game up till then. View attachment 705864

The developer mentioned a few posts back that they are working on fixing the problem, so hopefully wont have wait long for the fix

 

[Reniere]

Still no word on the fix with the scene that freezes?

 

[skinlover99]

Ok In an effort to clear some thing's up without giving away too much. Like many VN's I have seen, things are basically just worded differently to hang out in Patreon's grey area hopefully. More story is explained in the Patreon release. Seeing as how I'm new to this I wrote the story that way just for that purpose as I don't know how to patch ren'py to change wording and such yet.
Also, this is my very first EVERYTHING. First time rendering, (started in late September.) First time coding ren'py (literally started it for the first time 5 days ago.) First time writing a story so bear with me if it gets a little cheesy porn plotty.
I hope in time to get better with all of the above. I just found out yesterday how to make my renders faster than 4 to 12 hours long so hopefully, that will help speed things along update wise.
Yes, there are going to be choices and there will be more in the future as I learn ren'py. For my first release, I myself feel it is very basic. I want the story to have different path's but I'm just one person doing it all so it may not end up a total choose your fate story for some time if ever.

For your very first everything it is not bad. I agree there are some plot holes here and there, but you made clear this is not going to be on the level of Shakespeare. Perhaps take time in the upcoming update to look into some creative writing tips online. Don't let the level of hate your getting from this recent update stop you. Some things are not for everyone and instead of just moving on they feel the need to bash the crap out of it like some little kid with a keyboard having a tantrum.
After reading the post's on this forum and seeing that you are doing EVERYTHING yourself is credit due. NONE of the people who are throwing shade at you could even begin to think of doing all the rendering, coding, writing and distribution on 4 platforms in a timely manner like you have. For all we know there was a reason for the way everyone acted in this chapter, and that may become clear later. It was made clear that MC was a man whore in the very first screens. Perhaps painting the characters in this light and it causing others to be like him will cause him to change his ways?
I also want to note that the way you are setting this up so that it is not a total Alabama in-breeder story like so many of these games are anymore is rather nice. I know you wrote it this way to avoid the incest for patreon support, but you may have inadvertently done something new and different that could work great and provide something that is not the same have sex with your sister story. I for one will wait and see where this goes and hope you keep working as hard as you have. To the rest of the people on here throwing a tantrum if you don't like it fine then don't like it and move on don't sit here bashing a first time developer because you are not getting everything you wanted in a game you have been provided free of charge.

 

[MichaelFenix]

Well, I guess this update wasn't a crowd-pleaser huh? Well to each their own I guess. I'd like to thank those that are providing some actual constructive criticism, I appreciate it.

For the people who are mentioning the tags on this, I have no control over this thread. I can't add tags, I definitely can not delete posts like someone claimed I did.

To those who are going off on plot holes for some of the things, I agree there are some miss-steps and overlooks in my story that could use some more explanation. Some are from my lack of experience in writing. (I'm the guy who got a D in his high school English class and when asked by the teacher about it I told her "I AIN'T GONNA BE NO NOVELIST." lol.) and some is from rushing to finish updates by the deadlines I set. I will say however that the character's actions on things will be explained later. Except for the Jen and Haley exam scene. She was supposed to mention she is not in a dating relationship with MC and that was an overlook from rushing on my part. I don't know if adding that extra bit will break save files or not so I have to look into that.

Now for the reason that I logged in today, the android users. I have no idea why but for some reason the video files were causing it to break on a lot of devices. So I redid all the mp4 video files and so far I have tried it on 2 different phones and a tablet and it's working on those. So I hope it will work for everyone now. I am unsure about continuing on the android platform since so far EVERY update has caused some game-breaking issue. If it continues to be this big of a problem every update, then I may drop releasing on android because of the time it is consuming every time. So far in total, I have lost about a week's worth of hours just trying to get android releases made and working. I hope this trend does not continue and future updates go smoothly.


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[Glooskabe]

For the people who are mentioning the tags on this, I have no control over this thread. I can't add tags, I definitely can not delete posts like someone claimed I did.

You can't edit the tags directly yourself, but I'm pretty sure you can request tags although I don't know the procedure to do that. It might be as simple as making a post on the thread requesting the tags and then reporting the post so it will be seen by a moderator. Maybe someone else more in the know on the procedures here can help with that. I do think that appropriate tags will help prevent many if not most of the reactions you've seen.

I don't think it's going to be for me, but I wish you luck with your game. You're doing a lot of things right, and your response to some, ahem, spirited criticism says a lot about your strength of character. You'll need that around here!

Stay safe! Stay healthy!

 

[Nospamwss]

the last update ruined the whole game... by sticking another man in there... in the fuck of this shit.
was the patron...
would have known they'd put this shit in... I am totally disappointed
sorry about the google translation

 

[Dyson2020]

Instead of the hate why not just ask the Dev. to give more options to make some things avoidable. He might just be like ok no problem if he doesn't quit playing then. A lot of people don't like any other guy having sex besides the MC some don't want lesbian scenes. More choices would be cool and stop a lot of hate. I really like the game keep up the good work

 

[Darknesssilent]

currently as the game stands right now it missing alot of tags, decisions in this game mean nothing as all branches lead to the same result and same path, the dev will have the same problems with future updates

 

[Nospamwss]

Instead of the hate why not just ask the Dev. to give more options to make some things avoidable. He might just be like ok no problem if he doesn't quit playing then. A lot of people don't like any other guy having sex besides the MC some don't want lesbian scenes. More choices would be cool and stop a lot of hate. I really like the game keep up the good work

I didn't see a hint of "NTR and Sharing"on "Patreon"!
I'm also being asked why I demand 100% of the game's tag information from the developer! Here's an example of what a developer without mentioning "NTR and Sharing" enters this shit into the game!
Could at least initially enter "planned tags" so that people who don't like all this crap don't waste time and become patrons!
apologise for Google translation

 

[AshramAscendant]

I understand people are a bit angry/taken aback by the whole hotel orgy, but, if they were actually reading the story, it would have been evident that Gwen straight up spiked the alcohol with an aphrodisiac. Which she stole from Haley's purse while you, the MC, was fucking her in the shower at the bar.

I am opposed to NTR in nearly every game i have played. I had no problem with this scene. If the fatass Dwayne (I think that was his name) had been the second guy, then i would have had misgivings.

All in all I say keep up the good work.

Edit: Sorry. It was the younger Brittney, not Gwen, who spiked the drink.

 

[Nospamwss]

I understand people are a bit angry/taken aback by the whole hotel orgy, but, if they were actually reading the story, it would have been evident that Gwen straight up spiked the alcohol with an aphrodisiac. Which she stole from Haley's purse while you, the MC, was fucking her in the shower at the bar.

I am opposed to NTR in nearly every game i have played. I had no problem with this scene. If the fatass Dwayne (I think that was his name) had been the second guy, then i would have had misgivings.

All in all I say keep up the good work.

it doesn't change anything.
by the middle of the game, half the women will be pregnant with Dwayne.

 

[Darknesssilent]

I understand people are a bit angry/taken aback by the whole hotel orgy, but, if they were actually reading the story, it would have been evident that Gwen straight up spiked the alcohol with an aphrodisiac. Which she stole from Haley's purse while you, the MC, was fucking her in the shower at the bar.

I am opposed to NTR in nearly every game i have played. I had no problem with this scene. If the fatass Dwayne (I think that was his name) had been the second guy, then i would have had misgivings.

All in all I say keep up the good work.

for 1 it was Britney that took the drugs second there is no tag i sure the hell dont want a 18 year old virgins cum on my dick from sloppy seconds third was no choice to have him not join so why make choices in the game but not at that scene

 

[BabooJ1]

for 1 it was Britney that took the drugs second there is no tag i sure the hell dont want a 18 year old virgins cum on my dick from sloppy seconds third was no choice to have him not join so why make choices in the game but not at that scene

Yes, his participation should have been a choice. Gwen did what was asked she brought the desk clerk upstairs to the room and fulfilled her dare but now there should have been a choice by MC to include him in for the rest of the orgy or not and if not then desk clerk would still have been happy seeing all the girls naked anyway.

I for one didn't want him to participate and it is for this whole reason the game has been ruined for me.

 

[KyoriKusagami]

Well, I guess this update wasn't a crowd-pleaser huh? Well to each their own I guess. I'd like to thank those that are providing some actual constructive criticism, I appreciate it.

For the people who are mentioning the tags on this, I have no control over this thread. I can't add tags, I definitely can not delete posts like someone claimed I did.

To those who are going off on plot holes for some of the things, I agree there are some miss-steps and overlooks in my story that could use some more explanation. Some are from my lack of experience in writing. (I'm the guy who got a D in his high school English class and when asked by the teacher about it I told her "I AIN'T GONNA BE NO NOVELIST." lol.) and some is from rushing to finish updates by the deadlines I set. I will say however that the character's actions on things will be explained later. Except for the Jen and Haley exam scene. She was supposed to mention she is not in a dating relationship with MC and that was an overlook from rushing on my part. I don't know if adding that extra bit will break save files or not so I have to look into that.

Now for the reason that I logged in today, the android users. I have no idea why but for some reason the video files were causing it to break on a lot of devices. So I redid all the mp4 video files and so far I have tried it on 2 different phones and a tablet and it's working on those. So I hope it will work for everyone now. I am unsure about continuing on the android platform since so far EVERY update has caused some game-breaking issue. If it continues to be this big of a problem every update, then I may drop releasing on android because of the time it is consuming every time. So far in total, I have lost about a week's worth of hours just trying to get android releases made and working. I hope this trend does not continue and future updates go smoothly.


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Even if you don't have any control over this thread, it doesn't mean you can't make clear what are the planned content this game will have in your previous posts. There are kinks(like sharing for example) if you put without any warning in your game, you will always get a backslash from it, so be careful about it.

 

[Look-see]

do any of the choices actually change anything? i mean the club/sex scene didnt really affect jack. also i assumed the choice to walk in on sisters on first chapter or to stay and watch would be like deciding if you want to enable sex betweeen them or lesbian sex in general...i was wrong. then the physical exam sucked cause also couldnt prevent that scene. hotel scene obviously got flak. definitely needs some rework to help make game better for players that were into the game originally. dont get me wrong if developer wants to keep going this way by all means go ahead its your game make what u want. but it might push players away as well. then theres the orgy. i understand sex scenes/content is what we come to these games for but we also come for a decent enough story. the orgy scene seems like it was just for the sake of sex and if thats all we wanted we would just watch porn. but yeah if choices dont matter in this game just make it Kinetic

 

[MichaelFenix]

So for the sake of anyone reading this thread now a few things.

1. people are screaming NTR. I looked up the definition of it since I never heard it used before.

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Japanese acronym for

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, used to define a genre of

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(Hentai Game), meaning "Cuckold". In short, the main

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loved one(s) are taken or seduced away from him and the heroine might be willing or unwilling. This is to cause an emotion of deep jealousy on the reader.

This does not apply at this point since the MC don't have an actual love interest yet, However it is having the NTR effect on most of you from what I can see. If the MC was actually IN love with any of the women at this point then yes it would apply, however at this point and time the only ACTUAL love he has is for Haley as a friend/fuck buddy and the twins as sisters. I'll try to add some dialogue in to help clear this up if I can with current content.

2. For upcoming and future tags, this story at some point is going to have at least a hint of most other well-known kinks. what exactly I don't know for certain. But from what I can tell is if someone gets handcuffed to the bedpost in a scene then someone will start calling this bondage porn and start demanding a BDSM tag. I only know the general direction this story is going details and whatnot for most of this have not been written or even thought of yet. I'm on the same ride as all of you right now wondering what's gonna happen next. All I know is everything so far is just the beginning of the story. The title is "The Island"
and they are not even there yet where the actual focus of the story I planned really is supposed to begin. This so far was supposed to be a little backstory and filler until they end up there but it kind of ran away from me in this direction.

What I do know is there won't be any there won't be any futa/trans stuff, no 2 girls 1 cup stuff.
no MC getting anything more than a pinky in his ass during a blowjob. no male on male, And no OTHER MALE having sex with his ACTUAL LOVE INTEREST once he gets a love interest.

As for impact choices they are in fact coming as I have stated many times I am new to this and am learning as I go and trying to do it in a set time frame that people want is far from easy. but I'm doing the best I can to keep moving forward with things and adding new things in ren'py each update.

So I hope that helps clear some things up for most of you

 

[Darknesssilent]

So for the sake of anyone reading this thread now a few things.

1. people are screaming NTR. I looked up the definition of it since I never heard it used before.

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Japanese acronym for

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, used to define a genre of

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(Hentai Game), meaning "Cuckold". In short, the main

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loved one(s) are taken or seduced away from him and the heroine might be willing or unwilling. This is to cause an emotion of deep jealousy on the reader.

This does not apply at this point since the MC don't have an actual love interest yet, However it is having the NTR effect on most of you from what I can see. If the MC was actually IN love with any of the women at this point then yes it would apply, however at this point and time the only ACTUAL love he has is for Haley as a friend/fuck buddy and the twins as sisters. I'll try to add some dialogue in to help clear this up if I can with current content.

2. For upcoming and future tags, this story at some point is going to have at least a hint of most other well-known kinks. what exactly I don't know for certain. But from what I can tell is if someone gets handcuffed to the bedpost in a scene then someone will start calling this bondage porn and start demanding a BDSM tag. I only know the general direction this story is going details and whatnot for most of this have not been written or even thought of yet. I'm on the same ride as all of you right now wondering what's gonna happen next. All I know is everything so far is just the beginning of the story. The title is "The Island"
and they are not even there yet where the actual focus of the story I planned really is supposed to begin. This so far was supposed to be a little backstory and filler until they end up there but it kind of ran away from me in this direction.

What I do know is there won't be any there won't be any futa/trans stuff, no 2 girls 1 cup stuff.
no MC getting anything more than a pinky in his ass during a blowjob. no male on male, And no OTHER MALE having sex with his ACTUAL LOVE INTEREST once he gets a love interest.

As for impact choices they are in fact coming as I have stated many times I am new to this and am learning as I go and trying to do it in a set time frame that people want is far from easy. but I'm doing the best I can to keep moving forward with things and adding new things in ren'py each update.

So I hope that helps clear some things up for most of you

i think the fact is you have choices in the game why don't you have choices for the front desk guy not joining it would stop the comments about it you also need to get a mod to add tags that are missing drugs and sharing so people know whats in your game. For me i don't mind he was there but where i stop at is the fact 2 of the 3 women you can pick where sloppy seconds which i hate and seems to be most others, would you like to go down on a woman after she got crempied not me hence sloppy seconds .

 

[Lucian Light]

This game needs ntr tag asap.
Its not even sharing bc you don't have a choice.
Btw dev an advice to you, check your story and what you are going to include in it, to add the proper tags, all this would have been avoided by adding the proper tag, also i don't know if your plan is to make the game a ntr game, bc so far it seems to me that you didn't even knew what ntr stands for, because adding that guy out of nowhere you lost a lot of potential supporters.

Also it doesn't matter if they are not LI yet, if they are future LI then its straight up ntr because they are not in a relationship with that guy.

For upcoming and future tags, this story at some point is going to have at least a hint

Btw this is wrong because you never put a hint that another guy was going to come an fuck the girls lmao