This 0.1 grammar needs some work. Especially, lot's of using your instead of you're and viceversa. (I know it might be confusing that first is owning or having something and latter is about being [you are].) Also, some missing apostrophes (and other punctuation), using commas instead of periods (full stops aka . ) and stuffing two or more sentences into a single one. Here's an example: "This is so fucked up, So where did all this other DNA come from are we related to anyone at all?"
But, it's a good start. I'll be waiting to see 0.2 ...