VN Ren'Py The Keymaster [v1.3] [Ptypoe]

[mafarus]

Ellie will not be pregn

What?!

Do you even know about 'travel magic'?!

Sometimes I really wonder what they teach kids in school these days!

Oh well This is fantasy territory, and everyone has their own kinks. I'm not surprised or judged because I'm not without sin myself.

 

[single_guy_from_au]

I saw this message on Patreon, but I was not sure if people on this forum could give any suggestions (see the last sentence) -

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Nevertheless I decided to post some of my thoughts.

I am currently playing 'Travel Path' (with LI: Mallory), so my comments are mostly for people who also play 'Travel Path' (or both ).

MC is really enjoying his life (having a lot of hot dates with many girls from different worlds) , but Eleanor and Jessica are barely involved in 'hot actions' on 'Travel Path' (except other girls and some fury friends).

So here is a brief list of people who I think definitely need some help from Eleanor and Jessica :

• Lord Glenholme - who help MC (and others) many times. And plus MC is actively 'dating' Ce'dara, Ce'fora, Ce'vale (and counting), but Lord Glenholme did not get any 'action/thank you' for his help from Eleanor and Jessica. It does not seem to be fair to me.
• Commander Canaarn - this brave commander was risking his life helping MC (and others) and again there is no 'appreciation' from Eleanor and Jessica. Let's face it - MC could have been killed without Canaarn's help and the girls don't care?!
• Barnabas (Hannah's father) - MC took the only daughter from the captain and the poor father is left alone in his empty house - all by himself (he could be crying every night after losing Hannah ). Eleanor and Jessica could at least visit him (once in a while) to help with 'different things'.

If you ask me - it is all about fairness.

ptypoe - your game is one of the best on this forum and hopefully you will 'make things right' in all these three cases (and I can find more 'unfair' cases - only if you want).

 

[Deluxeboi]

This entire game feels like Its the equivalent of devs dodging the inc*st tag for patreon bucks but with NTR instead. Its not NTR but it really feels like one. Like the entire "curse" is just an excuse to have content like that, and worse of all Lucy keeps ruining MC life because of her jealously and she keeps fucking other people on the side. There is no bigger hypocrite in this game. Like if you like Lucy thats fine but I dont blame people that hate her. Mallory is also not that good as LI but Its not as toxic like Lucy is.
Seriously there is no hope for Lucy she is a character that deserved much better and you made her feel like a villain that only cares about herself above everyone else.
Like even at the start you made her absolute awful "haha I am like James bond i fuck everything" minutes later "nooo how the mc dares to ogle other girls that are not me!". (mallory dress)
Easily one of the worst characters written wise in a Renpy game.

 

[single_guy_from_au]

This entire game feels like Its the equivalent of devs dodging the inc*st tag for patreon bucks but with NTR instead. Its not NTR but it really feels like one. Like the entire "curse" is just an excuse to have content like that, and worse of all Lucy keeps ruining MC life because of her jealously and she keeps fucking other people on the side. There is no bigger hypocrite in this game. Like if you like Lucy thats fine but I dont blame people that hate her. Mallory is also not that good as LI but Its not as toxic like Lucy is.
Seriously there is no hope for Lucy she is a character that deserved much better and you made her feel like a villain that only cares about herself above everyone else.
Like even at the start you made her absolute awful "haha I am like James bond i fuck everything" minutes later "nooo how the mc dares to ogle other girls that are not me!". (mallory dress)
Easily one of the worst characters written wise in a Renpy game.

What is wrong with Mallory as LI?!

I play this part and I love it.

 

[BigJoe644]

Oh well This is fantasy territory, and everyone has their own kinks. I'm not surprised or judged because I'm not without sin myself.

Read Family path

Ellie will not be pregn

What?!

Do you even know about 'travel magic'?!

Sometimes I really wonder what they teach kids in school these days!

I guess some folks didn't answer Rose right during their getaway with Eillie, and at the park this update when Ellie asked the MC want kids (Yes/No) so the MC can learn to remove the travel magic. Family Path only, Traveler Path doesn't matter just answer rose correctly.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

The Keymaster - progress update


Hi everyone,

Another quick update. I am well advanced on the scene finder. It is nice to be able to call up all the sex scenes for particular characters from a central spot, and I’m also doing housekeeping improvements as I go.

I have also made more than 200 new images. Mainly sex scenes, but some story as well. Thanks to those of you that have communicated your wants in this area; it's given me some good ideas. If you have a favourite scene you want to see, don’t be afraid to ask!

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[single_guy_from_au]

The Keymaster - progress update


Hi everyone,

Another quick update. I am well advanced on the scene finder. It is nice to be able to call up all the sex scenes for particular characters from a central spot, and I’m also doing housekeeping improvements as I go.

I have also made more than 200 new images. Mainly sex scenes, but some story as well. Thanks to those of you that have communicated your wants in this area; it's given me some good ideas. If you have a favourite scene you want to see, don’t be afraid to ask!

P

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I am really looking forward to the new release!

I wonder how many people gave some suggestions/ideas to ptypoe and hopefully the developer checks this forum for some ideas too.

 

[AMRAVN]

Apologies, I actually forgot uploading the reviews here. I'll do a combined number of 7/10 for the Keystone Arc and Elementals Arc, with the former being a 7.5 and the latter being a 6.5.

I'll dump text on the reviews here, but for both full reviews go read them on my website.

Spoiler: The Keymaster (Null Stone Arc)

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Spoiler: The Keymaster (Elemental Arc)

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Tips for Ptypoe:

1. Refocus on the strong part of your concept.
2. Don't drag out things from the past too much.
3. The travel is a strong part of your uniqueness.
4. Family love can be much more taboo.
5. Honestly, let Lucy go. I liked Mallory, but at this point...

 

[4rotciv8]

Apologies, I actually forgot uploading the reviews here. I'll do a combined number of 7/10 for the Keystone Arc and Elementals Arc, with the former being a 7.5 and the latter being a 6.5.

I'll dump text on the reviews here, but for both full reviews go read them on my website.

Spoiler: The Keymaster (Null Stone Arc)

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Spoiler: The Keymaster (Elemental Arc)

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Tips for Ptypoe:

1. Refocus on the strong part of your concept.
2. Don't drag out things from the past too much.
3. The travel is a strong part of your uniqueness.
4. Family love can be much more taboo.
5. Honestly, let Lucy go. I liked Mallory, but at this point...

Make INCEST, optional, on your Regular, PUBLIC RELEASE!!!!?

 

[single_guy_from_au]

Make INCEST, optional, on your Regular, PUBLIC RELEASE!!!!?

It is optional - it is called 'Traveler Path' (vs 'Family Path').

You select it when the game starts.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

The Keymaster - progress update



Ce'fora and Jessica...what can they be talking about? You'll find out in the next update!

It's been slow going since my previous post but I should be able to put more time in now. I'm still adding in the scene finder, run-checking it, and fixing a whole lot of small errors while I do it. And writing new scenes for the lovely Jessica too. I'll get it to you as soon as I can guys!

P

 

[Aion_Abyss]

Ellie will not be pregn

What?!

Do you even know about 'travel magic'?!

Sometimes I really wonder what they teach kids in school these days!

That just sounds like a weird restriction made up by a dev who wanted some reason to excuse him not liking pregnancy. There are probably several games on this site with girls who get impregnated after traveling through time and/or space like in this one

So, no I haven't heard of it aside from in this game

 

[COOLMASTER]

any up date ?

 

[4rotciv8]

Oh well This is fantasy territory, and everyone has their own kinks. I'm not surprised or judged because I'm not without sin myself.

I was fantasizing that ELLIE, would be Impregnated by her Dragon Lover, & give BIRTH to a new species (half human male & half Dragon...lower part!!?? Also JESSICA would have a Torrid Affair, with the Unicorn & gave BIRTH to a Centaur!!???? Just my wild imagination!!!!

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

The Keymaster - progress update



Hey people,

Long time no post! But I have been working on The Keymaster. Doing several things at once in fact, according to my available time and access to a good computer:

• I’ve pretty much finished programming for the “scene finder”. Now I’m running through the whole game several times to look for bugs. While I do that, I'm tightening up some of the dialogue and images (and fixing old bugs!).
• I’m adding new scenes in the next release, and for that I’ve made several hundred new images. Some will be in standalone sex scenes, accessed via the scene finder. The rest are for a continuation of one part of the previous release. I still need to add these into the main Ren’Py code.
• I’ve also been writing a story line for the next few releases, and making images for that. This includes optimising the visuals for new characters and using spare rendering time for long renders in particular locations. One of the “joys” of Daz is that one location may render accurately in twenty minutes while another may take six hours!

Anyway, I’m still at it guys, and I look forward to getting the next release to you.

P

 

[Fitharia]

Ellie will not be pregn

What?!

Do you even know about 'travel magic'?!

Sometimes I really wonder what they teach kids in school these days!

For this story it made like that, so yea there won't be impragnations.

But you are funny when speak about Do you even know about 'travel magic'? and what they teach kids in school these days!, simply put in reality "travel magic" doesn't excist it fiction, why would they even teach this on school what doesn't excist?

 

[single_guy_from_au]

For this story it made like that, so yea there won't be impragnations.

But you are funny when speak about Do you even know about 'travel magic'? and what they teach kids in school these days!, simply put in reality "travel magic" doesn't excist it fiction, why would they even teach this on school what doesn't excist?

That was just a joke.

 

[newdawn75]

does ellie ever fuck jess with her futa?

 

[single_guy_from_au]

Any news about this amazing game?

 

[4rotciv8]

That just sounds like a weird restriction made up by a dev who wanted some reason to excuse him not liking pregnancy. There are probably several games on this site with girls who get impregnated after traveling through time and/or space like in this one

So, no I haven't heard of it aside from in this game

How long does the Travel Magic last??? If ELLIE were to stay with her DRAGON LOVER for several weeks or months, would the magic wear off???