Funnily enough, there has been some english make game in this side that have surprised me with conquenses ending; 'A promise best left unkept' and 'Turning the page' are the only examples I have at the moment
I wish ending 1.3 were a little more brutal for Kendo and Mary. I wonder why developers are hesitant to really give at least one devastating ending to the cheaters. Even Turning the Page's bad ending for Sophie wasn't that bad at all.
In turning page, Paige ends up miserable; do I wish more suffering was shown. absolubly, but I take what I get.
But I agree with you, if a dev is willing to write an scenario with consequences, why do they hold back? I mean, they are willing to put the MC through a psycological hell; they clearly have the creativity to come up with something.
But I agree with you, if a dev is willing to write an scenario with consequences, why do they hold back? I mean, they are willing to put the MC through a psycological hell; they clearly have the creativity to come up with something.
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mzer0
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Wow. Just started playing this last week-ish and I gotta say I enjoyed it for the most part. I like the NTR but some of it is too over the top for me and I'm not really a fan of the sand box shit, but it's still pretty good. Definitely like that the Dev doesn't really give anyone too much 'plot armor'. Everyone gets fucked up. LOL.
It's not often that I read something that makes me what to write something...which I did.
So here is my tribute to this game. An epilogue to the Arato Route (specifically Ending 3). I've always been curious to see an NTR where the FMC actually tries to go back to the MC after really cruelly betraying him and this route provided the perfect opportunity to explore that. If that's your thing, I hope you enjoy.
It's a short one only 4,700 words.
Note: This is not a revenge story. Also, technically no sex scenes.
It's not often that I read something that makes me what to write something...which I did.
So here is my tribute to this game. An epilogue to the Arato Route (specifically Ending 3). I've always been curious to see an NTR where the FMC actually tries to go back to the MC after really cruelly betraying him and this route provided the perfect opportunity to explore that. If that's your thing, I hope you enjoy.
It's a short one only 4,700 words.
Note: This is not a revenge story. Also, technically no sex scenes.
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Hey, this was really good! I particularly enjoyed the way you wrote it from Mary's POV.Wow. Just started playing this last week-ish and I gotta say I enjoyed it for the most part. I like the NTR but some of it is too over the top for me and I'm not really a fan of the sand box shit, but it's still pretty good. Definitely like that the Dev doesn't really give anyone too much 'plot armor'. Everyone gets fucked up. LOL.
It's not often that I read something that makes me what to write something...which I did.
So here is my tribute to this game. An epilogue to the Arato Route (specifically Ending 3). I've always been curious to see an NTR where the FMC actually tries to go back to the MC after really crueling betraying him and this route provided the perfect opportunity to explore that. If that's your thing, I hope you enjoy.
It's a short one only 4,700 words.
Note: This is not a revenge story. Aslo, technically no sex scenes.
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Thanks for writing it and sharing it~
mzer0
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It's really high praise that you enjoyed it, man. Good luck on the rest of the game.
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Wow, even though I didn't play Arato route, this ending you wrote was really good. I love revenge in NTR games, but I also love remorse and prick of conscience that causes never ending regret. Now I have to play Arato route and see how was Ending 3. Ofc it is personal preference, but after your epilogue I'd want to see Satoshi can't handle to see Mary again around him and commit to suicide and dies. After that Mary sinks into depression that she never recovers, how wonderful that beWow. Just started playing this last week-ish and I gotta say I enjoyed it for the most part. I like the NTR but some of it is too over the top for me and I'm not really a fan of the sand box shit, but it's still pretty good. Definitely like that the Dev doesn't really give anyone too much 'plot armor'. Everyone gets fucked up. LOL.
It's not often that I read something that makes me what to write something...which I did.
So here is my tribute to this game. An epilogue to the Arato Route (specifically Ending 3). I've always been curious to see an NTR where the FMC actually tries to go back to the MC after really crueling betraying him and this route provided the perfect opportunity to explore that. If that's your thing, I hope you enjoy.
It's a short one only 4,700 words.
Note: This is not a revenge story. Aslo, technically no sex scenes.
You must be registered to see the links
mzer0
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Agreed. A pricked conscience is even better to me than 'revenge' because it's more believable and even more heartbreaking. I had intended to make the story a bit longer and really dive into it. Unfortunately, I'm working on my own shit so my time is limited. I actually cranked this one out in one sitting. LOL.Wow, even though I didn't play Arato route, this ending you wrote was really good. I love revenge in NTR games, but I also love remorse and prick of conscience that causes never ending regret. Now I have to play Arato route and see how was Ending 3. Ofc it is personal preference, but after your epilogue I'd want to see Satoshi can't handle to see Mary again around him and commit to suicide and dies. After that Mary sinks into depression that she never recovers, how wonderful that be
Be prepared for Ending 3. It's pretty brutal. Over the top at times, but still very brutal. Glad you enjoyed my epilogue.
I know Takumi's a careless idiot that people don't like, but I sorta expected him to be more opportunistic trying to hit on Mary/Natsuki/Hanako. Poor dude fumbled the bag twice for a threesome with Rin.
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Does anyone what the special condition is in Ending 2 of Kendo's Route? Someone else asked a while ago but they didn't get a response.
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PrototypeMan
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The special condition = fresh patch with Kendo "King Route". Which is not available, for now.
in this updated we finally move on from arato?
maelontuchanka
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Thought this would be done by now. The last time i played this the MC found out everything... and you had to pick. Or something like that.
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I love the NTR mystery/oblivious scenes with Mary