Not bad.
Didn't get me off (well, not everybody's on Maelion's level), but the Payback End gave me some catharsis and for that I will say it's not bad.
It surprised me a little to see Kendo keeping his word and not dumping Mary like a hot potato the minute his life went sideways because of her--and that she kept her word and stuck with him (I know it was mutual, but trust me, most 'tryst couples' in their position would dump all the blame on each other and cause even more chaos). It's even kind of realistic in that they didn't actually suffer that much.
I guess he was a halfway decent guy after all. As for Satoshi, I applaud him. Exposing the truth is never inherently wrong, and it's only when innocents are hurt that the question even comes up. I guess whatever poor underling Kendo had to fire to cut costs was innocent, but then again...I don't fucking care. I only regret he didn't...go a bit further; hitting Kendo in the business and wallet was good, but Mary didn't actually get hurt any more than any nasty rumor with ambiguous proof would hurt anybody.
And seriously? Wedding photo payback? Pfft. You deserve each other, have surgery to get joined at the hip for all I care.
Didn't get me off (well, not everybody's on Maelion's level), but the Payback End gave me some catharsis and for that I will say it's not bad.
It surprised me a little to see Kendo keeping his word and not dumping Mary like a hot potato the minute his life went sideways because of her--and that she kept her word and stuck with him (I know it was mutual, but trust me, most 'tryst couples' in their position would dump all the blame on each other and cause even more chaos). It's even kind of realistic in that they didn't actually suffer that much.
I guess he was a halfway decent guy after all. As for Satoshi, I applaud him. Exposing the truth is never inherently wrong, and it's only when innocents are hurt that the question even comes up. I guess whatever poor underling Kendo had to fire to cut costs was innocent, but then again...I don't fucking care. I only regret he didn't...go a bit further; hitting Kendo in the business and wallet was good, but Mary didn't actually get hurt any more than any nasty rumor with ambiguous proof would hurt anybody.
And seriously? Wedding photo payback? Pfft. You deserve each other, have surgery to get joined at the hip for all I care.