VN Ren'Py The Last Challenge [v0.2.0] [LustyDonkey]

[Augustus Commodus]

Oh Lexa is a keeper, I love me a loyal hothead

Agree to disagree: She is an abuser; she shouldn't be in a relationship with anyone until she can get her violent impulses under control. The only time her actions were justified are if Naomi pulled a knife.

I can't say I have a favorite, but the characters that currently have most of my interest are Allison, Brenda, and Jane. Not necessarily the best looking models or most interesting characters, but the most overall interested all things considered. Sadly, while a Brenda scene is available this update, I think I actually prefer the branch were MC gets everyone muffins.

FUCK, is it harem? The Lexi decision is already quite a gut punch, i can't choose between girls this early in a game

While I don't necessarily fault the characters since they're dumb kids and poor communication skills is entirely plausible, they should have had an honest conversation a long time ago. While I'm not a fan of the character of Lexa, I do feel bad dumping her, especially since she was apparently super sweet before the initial breakup; however, they waited until the very last minute—right before getting home—to have it. The MC still cares for her, and I will try to help her, but a relationship is off the table unless she can get her temper under control.

Good game, but I don't like how they force the MC having cheated with us having no control over that choice, but the rest of the game is choices. Makes no sense, unless you just want to make drama with your loyal girlfriend for no reason?

As mentioned elsewhere, the MC never cheated on Lexa. Still, I do feel that way about making the Donnie-MC special canonical. I don't necessarily mind swinging/sharing content, and I will likely explore that content in some of my playthroughs; however, it feels a strange dynamic to place in the the characters' backstory without player input.

Also how do you fuck samantha in the preview?

Samantha likes dangerous men. When Murphy is trying to get out of having the MC take over as champion, grab his neck to get him to agree.

As for general comments to the dev if he reads them:

Very interesting concept. I've enjoyed what's there and hope the game get's completed.
Characters look good, and older characters look their age.
Needs proofreading.
Needs compression. It isn't too bad now, but at this rate, it will be a monster if completed.
A back function on character profiles would be nice to get back to the character menu.
Character profiles for family members, even if they will be replaced once meeting them in the present.
Character profiles for male characters. Honestly, they don't stick in my head as well as the female characters, so they probably need profiles more to remind me who they are.
Nitpick: After 10 years, there wouldn't be much in the way of plastic containers, packaged food and medicine would be expired and dangerous to consume, not much gas unless there are both local wells and refineries, etc. I mostly chalk this up to available DAZ assets.
It's dumb Yoona can't speak English after 10 years.
While it might have an in-world rationale, it is incredibly irresponsible and dangerous to release the characters into the world without some sort of orientation to prepare them for what they will find out there.

 

[Thedude715]

the intro tells you that people can die.

Oh I see, my ass has a tendency to skip through intros after reading so many novels. Anyway thats pretty cool, I dont mind that stuff as long as it is deserved. a.k.a not a super forced scenario. Looking forward to it whatever year the next update will come out lol.

 

[Kappa123456789]

This shit is a fucking gem. I can't recollect a game that branches out in so many different ways. It's incredible how much freedom the game gives you (when it's time for you to actually do stuff). Story is "fun" or well, very engaging. It really makes you give a shit. Writing is great. I feel like so many other games try to make side characters relevant in so many ways and fall completly flat. Here you actually can get invested into characters that are not MC or someone you expect to put his dick into (Donnie is the GOAT). I also really like the setting with it's dark tones. Models are pretty, animations could use some polishing IMO.
It really has potential to become [one of the] greatest.

But then you sober up and really start doubting that this project can find it's finale. I don't know the dev, I haven't been on his socials or whatever and played the game today for the first time. But I feel like this is too much content, story, art whatever to build for something that depends on people's donations/subs. And I can't imagine the dev (devs?) not getting overwhelmed by it, sooner or later. And we'll end up with another game that was great, got us invested in the story and then got abandoned.

Hopefully I'm talking out of my ass and that's not the case because whatever we got delivered until now is amazing. I'll follow this project closely and keep my fingers crossed.

 

[sigvar]

Yeah, this is the problem with games like this. Way too many branches. This is why a 15 min update took over a year to come out. I don't think projects like this should be taken on by developers who don't have the staff, funding and talent to produce more story progression than this in such a long time. Seen it happen quite often with these games that seem to go good but fizzle out and get abandoned or cut off and "completed" without a story resolution so they can jump onto another project to make more money as people get tired of subing for such low throughput.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Wait someone can die in this update? Or are you theorising?

the intro tells you that people can die.

Not only that, but if you open the character screens (clunky as fuck though they may be...why can't we back out of them again?) it shows : Status - Alive, which suggests they can also be Status - Deceased, or Status - Fucked Up Right Now etc.

 

[FalconLover420]

This shit is a fucking gem. I can't recollect a game that branches out in so many different ways. It's incredible how much freedom the game gives you (when it's time for you to actually do stuff). Story is "fun" or well, very engaging. It really makes you give a shit. Writing is great. I feel like so many other games try to make side characters relevant in so many ways and fall completly flat. Here you actually can get invested into characters that are not MC or someone you expect to put his dick into (Donnie is the GOAT). I also really like the setting with it's dark tones. Models are pretty, animations could use some polishing IMO.
It really has potential to become [one of the] greatest.

But then you sober up and really start doubting that this project can find it's finale. I don't know the dev, I haven't been on his socials or whatever and played the game today for the first time. But I feel like this is too much content, story, art whatever to build for something that depends on people's donations/subs. And I can't imagine the dev (devs?) not getting overwhelmed by it, sooner or later. And we'll end up with another game that was great, got us invested in the story and then got abandoned.

Hopefully I'm talking out of my ass and that's not the case because whatever we got delivered until now is amazing. I'll follow this project closely and keep my fingers crossed.

I 100% say these types of games are for a team and no solo dev, lest you risk burn out and abandon such a quality game.

An example is BADIK, the developer is raking in cash but he has said that project is making him burn out bad and might be his last game.

I am interested on how this game will play it out especially with the branching. I think it should be linear with different choices and then it leads back to linear. For example if you fucked Brenda, it should lead you back to being in the store with the rest and you meet the niece.

 

[superseveneight]

This shit is a fucking gem. I can't recollect a game that branches out in so many different ways. It's incredible how much freedom the game gives you (when it's time for you to actually do stuff). Story is "fun" or well, very engaging. It really makes you give a shit. Writing is great. I feel like so many other games try to make side characters relevant in so many ways and fall completly flat. Here you actually can get invested into characters that are not MC or someone you expect to put his dick into (Donnie is the GOAT). I also really like the setting with it's dark tones. Models are pretty, animations could use some polishing IMO.
It really has potential to become [one of the] greatest.

But then you sober up and really start doubting that this project can find it's finale. I don't know the dev, I haven't been on his socials or whatever and played the game today for the first time. But I feel like this is too much content, story, art whatever to build for something that depends on people's donations/subs. And I can't imagine the dev (devs?) not getting overwhelmed by it, sooner or later. And we'll end up with another game that was great, got us invested in the story and then got abandoned.

Hopefully I'm talking out of my ass and that's not the case because whatever we got delivered until now is amazing. I'll follow this project closely and keep my fingers crossed.

I wonder how much funding and how many people this game would require for the development to progress at a steady pace. The game is incredible but it just seems an impossible task for a solo developer to finish a project as ambitious as this.
A VN of this magnitude really deserves to have the best equipment and more manpower.

 

[colombianhoes]

I 100% say these types of games are for a team and no solo dev, lest you risk burn out and abandon such a quality game.

An example is BADIK, the developer is raking in cash but he has said that project is making him burn out bad and might be his last game. I am interested on how this game will play it out and watching it with interest

I think he said if he decides for another game, it will definitely be less ambitious.
But yeah, multi branches take lots of time, idk whats his plan tho
He may be signing up for more than he can chew, idk.
Also his SS page aint much active, i bet he has less than 300 subs

 

[iamcomming]

Well yeah, I would understand if she never learned English if she was an outcast. But that doesn't seem to be the case. She even sits on MC's lap at the gas station. Since she has spent years interacting with English speaking individuals you'd expect her to speak more than a couple of words. Especially not saying those couple of words wrong either. That just makes her look like an imbecile.

Point being, even with the absence of a teacher, spending time with people you'd learn the language.

Bro they spend 10 years theres fucking 10 years , i like the game but this part of yoona doesnt speak english is bullshit

if i dont have a translater, than i can sit and hearing everything and dont understand any word. for 10 year. excepting this or that.
they dont speak with her. they forget her. they let her sit and looking the windows for hours. not give her a drink or anything.
you can guess during that 10 year how much was the speaking with her. (i usually dont speak with a wall)

peoples say, if you move in another nation, you can learn the certain language. but they forgot to mention, you need a basic knowledge about that languange. what she dont have.

but you two are right. she looks to me who undertsand the english good enough. so, i can make a guess. maybe she is just pretending to cant speak. maybe she can, but maybe she really cant.

after Donnie said Joona is like the korean childhood friend and saw her giving water to the turtle, i thought maybe she really the childhood friend who sneaked into the school and now acting like a exchange student to be close to mc.

ask that, why nobody traded a korean-english dictionary to her during these 10 years.

Wait someone can die in this update? Or are you theorising?

the intro tells you that people can die.

status:alive
i suppose there will be a chance.

 

[link18]

This game is awesome we need fan sigs

 

[Daddy59]

Fantastic! Wonderful ! Thanks !

 

[Korat789]

This game is great, but 15 minute update after waiting whole year for another episode is not what we all expected. Hope the next one will be longer, it seems too much branching is the issue here.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

if i dont have a translater, than i can sit and hearing everything and dont understand any word. for 10 year. excepting this or that.
they dont speak with her. they forget her. they let her sit and looking the windows for hours. not give her a drink or anything.
you can guess during that 10 year how much was the speaking with her. (i usually dont speak with a wall)

peoples say, if you move in another nation, you can learn the certain language. but they forgot to mention, you need a basic knowledge about that languange. what she dont have.

but you two are right. she looks to me who undertsand the english good enough. so, i can make a guess. maybe she is just pretending to cant speak. maybe she can, but maybe she really cant.

after Donnie said Joona is like the korean childhood friend and saw her giving water to the turtle, i thought maybe she really the childhood friend who sneaked into the school and now acting like a exchange student to be close to mc.

ask that, why nobody traded a korean-english dictionary to her during these 10 years.



status:alive
i suppose there will be a chance.
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Hey, don't use Allison as a Status example, she's cool, keep her alive. ...her bitch sister, on the other hand...

 

[iamcomming]

Hey, don't use Allison as a Status example, she's cool, keep her alive. ...her bitch sister, on the other hand...

i dont have any problem with her. just she is the first one. if it is on me, even her sister Amanda will survive.
for now, only the three loser is on my death list.
but i will miss Murphy. ducking his gf behind his back is good feeling.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

i dont have any problem with her. just she is the first one. if it is on me, even her sister Amanda will survive.
for now, only the three loser is on my death list.
but i will miss Murphy. ducking his gf behind his back is good feeling.

I kept hoping "Tiny" Tony would get angry as we reminisced about what he did to Ji-Yeong and go rip him in half.

 

[Rake Tyler]

Who would have thought, I thought it was abandoned because I played the first version of it over a year ago, and now I see it with an update here

 

[Jaango]

Never expected that cliff hanger but loved it. Best girls so far are Lexa and Jane. Loved the bonding between Mc and victoria too. Honorable mention to Rosaline the smokie milf ( Hope to see more of her in future updates ). Ariana may be a fan of all dicks but she also got a nice character.

 

[jokesaside1]

This game is awesome and funny as hell, hope we get bigger updates though, keep the good work

 

[Dvnasty]

okie dokie

 

[simonauuu]

I said this before when this game was a demo and I will say it again with this v0.2.0. THIS GAME IS AWESOME!!! Donnie is funny and a real bro. The ending is a cliff hanger. Hope the updates come more often. I want to see Yoona drift the bus Initial D style with everyone in it out running the baddies.